Builds Eggwars Teams - Map Submission - "Picnic" (18 Players)

[iKurt]

Hello everyone,
Our internet went down for a few days, so I decided to do something productive.... make an Eggwars Map! As you can probably see, it's theme is a Picnic, the picnic mats were just gonna float like floating carpets, but that looked wwaaayy to ugly, so I put them on an island. Screenshots will be included in this post!

Please provide as much feedback as you can, I want lots of user input on what you want to see!
Have fun laughing at the screenshots!

Credits:
Credit to, iHaveNoRAM
and myself, iKurt



I should really change my profile pic, huh... oh well... I guess I'l look like a noob. :P

 

[zSem_]

its a nice start but it is a little bit plane... the trees looks wierd (I think bc world edit) mabey you can make it a lot smaller and hand made?!

 

[iKurt]

Thanks for your input, I'm still working on it.... I really do value your feedback!

 

[zSem_]

Thanks for your input, I'm still working on it.... I really do value your feedback!

no problem dude keep working on it <3

 

[Younisco]

I like the idea and the premise of it. Just an idea: the middle could be a full-fledged wooden bench with food on top of that. It is a very good start, but could be so much more.

 

[iKurt]

I like the idea and the premise of it. Just an idea: the middle could be a full-fledged wooden bench with food on top of that. It is a very good start, but could be so much more.

Thanks! I'll take that idea into consideration!

 

[Gainfullterror]

As @Sem_Lanters said, it's a bit plain.
I suggest that you carve out the stone chunks under the island & add some block variation to detail it.
The foods on the islands also look quite plain as they only have bland blocks adding color
I'm not a builder myself, so I can't fish out everything that could be changed. @booboomin

 

[RockBob4]

I like this. The only thing besides everyone else's suggestions is the egg placement. It would be really annoying to get up there and in OP they could pearl there and you would have no chance of knowing.

 

[ShadowM00n]

i love the map but a little more detail

 

[DonutG]

I like the idea and the design, but it lacks a bit details, maybe you should change the trees a bit, and the food at mid, but it still looks realy cool:).

 

[Aventador]

Great map! I rate 10/10. (For the haters, my opinion)

 

[Komodо]

Noice map! But yeah as already said, its too plain!

Btw, in Amersfoort we have this; https://goo.gl/images/ZNTsy0

(@De Supermarkt)

 

[ShadowM00n]

Btw, in Amersfoort we have this; https://goo.gl/images/ZNTsy0

lol haha picnic

 

[larswijn]

I like this. The only thing besides everyone else's suggestions is the egg placement.

This comment would be my comment if i wasn't to lazy to comment a comment. (commenting comments comment. whatever.)

 

[☩Mgoz☩]

mid is a bit too congested, but it looks great!

 

[TheQueenWaddle]

I like this. The only thing besides everyone else's suggestions is the egg placement. It would be really annoying to get up there and in OP they could pearl there and you would have no chance of knowing.

This would be just like Rome; a game would last 5-6 minutes tops.
Everyone who's suggesting "add more detail", that isn't specific. It's like looking at the U.S debt and saying, "just spend less money".
I really like it. It's a nice, quaint, rustic map. The thing I would change is the size of mid; shouldn't it be bigger than the other islands? Even if it's the same size as the bases, it would be better.

 

[iKurt]

Thanks for your feedback everyone! I'll change the egg placement because I do agree with the ender pearl thing, yes mid is going to be worked on, and some food and detail will be added there. :) Thanks!

 

[RockBob4]

Thanks for your feedback everyone! I'll change the egg placement because I do agree with the ender pearl thing, yes mid is going to be worked on, and some food and detail will be added there. :) Thanks!

Can't wait for the new screen shots!

 

[ShadowM00n]

Can't wait for the new screen shots!

me too i want to see them now:p

 

[MartijnMC]

I really like some of the trees, especially the small ones, however the big trees could be improved. You can use //replace 17 17:15 with worldedit to make the trees seem a bit less weird. Also try to change up the blocks a bit more. You use a lot of stained clay in the middle but if you mix it up with some other blocks you could make it more colourful and diverse. Same goes for the stone under the islands; mix it up with some blocks of almost the same colour.
Other than that good start and I'd love to see more of this map