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[Super_ryan94]

I am working on a map for eggwars but I'm not that good at every part of designing. I have an idea but I would like you to judge me on my work as I progress.

I'm editing this post to show my current progress.

Spoiler: Spawnislands

Spoiler: Eggroom island inside

Spoiler: spawnisland cutout

Spoiler: spawnflour layout

Spoiler: spawnisland downstairs layout

Spoiler: Mainisland outside

Spoiler: Mainisland inside

Spoiler: layout of the map

 

[Younisco]

It's WAY too small for a eggwars map, and its too symmetrical. Perhaps you use worldedit and voxelsniper? Youtube them on how to make peaks.

 

[Super_ryan94]

It's just a small piece of it-__- I have four more of those things and a main island behind. But is I make a pic of that the details are rether hard to see;)

 

[NoobSkills]

Put all of the tree into a bigger island? May be cool!

 

[Super_ryan94]

Before I got more remarks about the size of my map:

Spoiler: the full size of the map

I just want to know what shape I should use....

 

[Komodо]

I am working on a map for eggwars but I'm not that good at every part of designing. I have an idea but I would like you tojudge me on my work as I progress.

I want to make stalactites but I can't really pinpoint what the problem is. I don't know witch one looks natural and if none does what do I have to change?

please?

 

[Super_ryan94]

Komodo, could you explain your question?

 

[hgbf]

It's too symmetrical and too small.

 

[Younisco]

Still too small. Make it bigger, and make it less symmetrical, as it isn't natural.

 

[Super_ryan94]

Thanks

 

[Jarda169]

Maybe a little fire or something!

 

[Super_ryan94]

I already had fire in mind. But the theme will be caves so I have to think about how. idk if lava as replacement of the void is possible because then I'll use that.

 

[Deactivation]

im just seeing alot of circles

 

[Super_ryan94]

That is the layout of my map. I'll put in more picts along my progress;)

 

[Super_ryan94]

The main island almost completed and right three small islands completed.

Spoiler

 

[Super_ryan94]

Does this look more natural than the first ones?

 

[Super_ryan94]

I made a the way I would like to have the eggroom. I it allowed to have it this way?

Spoiler: cutout of the eggroom

I folded it open so that I could make a better picture of it.

 

[Megaaa]

What said above I agree: Too symmetrical
But the egg room is nice. IMO

 

[Super_ryan94]

I finished the main island. But now I got a little issue on the theme I'm using.....

Spoiler: outside

Spoiler: inside cutout

I don't know how I should light it up because the ice in the walls will melt.
Aside from that, does the shape of the island look good?

 

[Super_ryan94]

And this is the spawn island and the small islands with the gold and dia gen on each side and the island with the egg behind it.

Spoiler: still in progress