I really like the video nice to see those effects in there if you want to improve on your editing I would switch to a better program like Premier pro 14 or Davinci resolve 16, I personally started out with some basic editing software and when I understood the basics i got premiere pro, in that program, there is a lot of possibilities and the best way to learn how to use that program is just search tutorial on yt what effect/transition you want to create. When you understand premiere you can go to master level aka After Effects it used to make some insane video like this one (MASTER CLASS)
Watch from 0:57 (that video took him 20+hours to edit btw)
another tip is to use replaymod i would suggest badlion client replaymod since it is easier to use. when using replaymod use shaders to make it look better (i suggest Sildurs shaders Vibrant) also when creating your replaymod pathing use FOV 50 to make it look more up close for the viewer.
tip 3: Try to sync to music you choose with the clips you have in your editing program. For example, cutting your clips on the beat that will make the flow of the video better. You can also like to make a block clutch on the beat/drop of the music to also add more flow to your videos.
tip 4: when using slow-motion in your editing and you use replaymod use 120fps to render so the video won't stutter.
If you got any questions you can reply via this thread or send me a dm via discord: pipi#6603
My advice is based on my own experience in editing as I create this kind of video's and also still have a lot to learn but creativity is driving me to learn and i hope it will do the same for you
video's i make myself: