Hello cubecraft forum browsers! some of you may remember me, kkbubble. A few months back I made my very own "farewell" thread when i said that i am "quitting" CCG. This thread is not related to that at all, in fact it's about something completely different. I need your guys's help.
I never liked school, I hate it in fact. Long ago I started feeling like college wasn't for me. I don't want to perpetuate a systemI dislike. I have however, always enjoyed writing. Recently I decided to start writing a book, my "out" of college.
I already have the main arc of the plot mapped out, and three major characters and a few minor characters. However I soon learned that writing a book was not nearly as easy I would have thought, /Irony. I have written quite a bit so far, around 15 pages on word i'd like to say? Much of it is unfinished as of yet. I only have around 4 chapters, and there is a lot of revision to do. In addition I need outside opinion. My friends and family are a good start, but i need more. A sample size akin to that of a realistic audience for books. Then it hit me. I have a huge sample size of people on these forums, and many of them know me well. I remember that there is a wide age variety, boys and girls, people from all around the world, here. And so here is the request i ask of you guys. I would like to post small bits of my project on here, up to a chapter at a time. Since it could be quite long, I'll post a link to a site where you can view it, so it doesn't take up pages on here. If you would be willing to read it, and post feedback, I'd be so grateful. post anything related to the book, your opinions, your predictions, anything. I highly encourage nit picking! point out any contradictions you see!
If this is advertising, or not allowed than I am very sorry, and will not do this, just please tell me now :).
Just as a forewarning this might be too complicated for some of our younger readers, in addition there is detailed battle scenes that some might find disturbing. Also there are quite a few Biblical references, i'll post a short description of what they mean with with the link. I will try to post on fridays, if ether is a change in schedule i'll update it in my status. And last but not least, thank you all.
http://pastebin.com/iP5fn2C2
I never liked school, I hate it in fact. Long ago I started feeling like college wasn't for me. I don't want to perpetuate a systemI dislike. I have however, always enjoyed writing. Recently I decided to start writing a book, my "out" of college.
I already have the main arc of the plot mapped out, and three major characters and a few minor characters. However I soon learned that writing a book was not nearly as easy I would have thought, /Irony. I have written quite a bit so far, around 15 pages on word i'd like to say? Much of it is unfinished as of yet. I only have around 4 chapters, and there is a lot of revision to do. In addition I need outside opinion. My friends and family are a good start, but i need more. A sample size akin to that of a realistic audience for books. Then it hit me. I have a huge sample size of people on these forums, and many of them know me well. I remember that there is a wide age variety, boys and girls, people from all around the world, here. And so here is the request i ask of you guys. I would like to post small bits of my project on here, up to a chapter at a time. Since it could be quite long, I'll post a link to a site where you can view it, so it doesn't take up pages on here. If you would be willing to read it, and post feedback, I'd be so grateful. post anything related to the book, your opinions, your predictions, anything. I highly encourage nit picking! point out any contradictions you see!
If this is advertising, or not allowed than I am very sorry, and will not do this, just please tell me now :).
Just as a forewarning this might be too complicated for some of our younger readers, in addition there is detailed battle scenes that some might find disturbing. Also there are quite a few Biblical references, i'll post a short description of what they mean with with the link. I will try to post on fridays, if ether is a change in schedule i'll update it in my status. And last but not least, thank you all.
http://pastebin.com/iP5fn2C2
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