Builds Lucky Islands Teams (5) - Stardew

[IcePancake]

This is a random map inspired by a game that isn't really that well known (I think), called Stardew Valley.
(for reference: https://stardewvalleywiki.com/Stardew_Valley_Wiki )

Starter island includes:
15 Lucky blocks
41 Hay blocks (not including the small farms)
1 Iron block
1 Gold block
1 Anvil

Sub mid (bus stop) includes:
11 Lucky blocks
1 Enchanting table
1 Iron block

Sub mid (seasons + parkour part) includes:
21 Lucky blocks

Mid includes:
60 sponges
30 hay blocks
2 Iron blocks
4 Diamond ore
1 Diamond block
and several anvils + enchanting tables
(I don't mind if you vote no, not at all. But please give a reason so I can improve the map)

Spoiler: Starter island

Spoiler: Sub-Mid Bus stop

Spoiler: Sub-Mid Seasons

Spoiler: Mid

Spoiler: Overvieuw:

 

[kruisboogaapje]

Hi,
I really like you concept. You made this map in a very good looking way. But I think you can still improve it.

First of all, I want to mention that building a seasonal based map looks really really cool. I wanted to build a map with a seasonal theme for such a long time. But the gameplay is not fair like this. The players who start close to the 'winter' side of the map have an unfair advantage over the players who start at the opposite site of the map. The players with the advantage can make snowballs which you can use perfectly in this map to knock other players off the map while walking over the small and rickety bridges.

Secondly, I think you improve the roofs of the building by putting more details into them. The roofs now are just a big flat area that look boring. Maybe add some slabs or leafs for some more details. This alone, would improve the look of your map by a lot in my opinion.

And lastly, there are so so so many lucky blocks on the 'sub-mid season' islands and 'sub-mid bus stop' island. I think you can reduce this amount of lucky blocks for a more realistic looking lucky island map.

However, as I said I really like the idea and your build so far. So, if you improve you map just a little bit I can vote a yes for sure. But for now I have to stick to a 'no' vote unfortunately. Don't give up now or soon, I really think you can do this!

~Kruisboogaapje

 

[IcePancake]

Hi,
I really like you concept. You made this map in a very good looking way. But I think you can still improve it.

First of all, I want to mention that building a seasonal based map looks really really cool. I wanted to build a map with a seasonal theme for such a long time. But the gameplay is not fair like this. The players who start close to the 'winter' side of the map have an unfair advantage over the players who start at the opposite site of the map. The players with the advantage can make snowballs which you can use perfectly in this map to knock other players off the map while walking over the small and rickety bridges.

Secondly, I think you improve the roofs of the building by putting more details into them. The roofs now are just a big flat area that look boring. Maybe add some slabs or leafs for some more details. This alone, would improve the look of your map by a lot in my opinion.

And lastly, there are so so so many lucky blocks on the 'sub-mid season' islands and 'sub-mid bus stop' island. I think you can reduce this amount of lucky blocks for a more realistic looking lucky island map.

However, as I said I really like the idea and your build so far. So, if you improve you map just a little bit I can vote a yes for sure. But for now I have to stick to a 'no' vote unfortunately. Don't give up now or soon, I really think you can do this!

~Kruisboogaapje

Thanks for giving me a clear awnser! i will certainly improve this map, I'm really glad you left such a good reply! I will chance the snow to white wool probably, will put more detail in the roof and balance out the lucky blocks!

 

[Soulless_Unity]

Hello, thank you for your efforts in submitting this.

Unfortunately, collectively the design team have decided to deny this map submission due to the following reasons:
-Map Layout doesn't come across as very bedrock friendly with so many small islands. Any map we implement, we hope to add to both Java & Bedrock as much as possible.
-Houses detailing

I do love the way you tried to think outside the box with map design. Good job on that! I've heard of Stardew Valley but never been fortunate enough to play the game. From the screenshots I think you did it justice, you should be proud of it