Builds NEW! Eggwars map named "Treat" for 4 teams of 3 players; Have a look!

[ParpiaJr]

Hope you like it!;

 

[ALI DATOO]

wow this is one cool, map I personally think it would be more balanced, against hackers, who fly and hide behind other, claustrophobic maps.
Good Idea ParpiaJr
and any admins here, please consider this map, would be awesome for christmas as well.
Ps: Love the pixel art :P

 

[Grimmay]

I like the map, but it just looks to plain to me. Try and add some texture to the floors e.g slabs. It's a good concept, but in my idea it definitely needs some development.

Good work though, keep it up, if I could build even nearly as good as you I'd be very proud

Thanks. James Lawrence

 

[Younisco]

The basic premise of this map is good. Please try to:
• Not make the islands flat. Try and learn VoxelSniper or Worldedit to know how to in fuller detail.
• Add terraforming under the islands. Again, look into VoxelSniper or Worldedit.
• Try not to use PixelArt as a main feature of an island. It is very bland and lacks detail. You can transform the PixelArt of Santa in a stocking into an actual organic. :P

Hope this helps!

 

[ParpiaJr]

The basic premise of this map is good. Please try to:
• Not make the islands flat. Try and learn VoxelSniper or Worldedit to know how to in fuller detail.
• Add terraforming under the islands. Again, look into VoxelSniper or Worldedit.
• Try not to use PixelArt as a main feature of an island. It is very bland and lacks detail. You can transform the PixelArt of Santa in a stocking into an actual organic. :p

Hope this helps!

Thanks for the advice, I will make the amendments! :D

 

[ParpiaJr]

I like the map, but it just looks to plain to me. Try and add some texture to the floors e.g slabs. It's a good concept, but in my idea it definitely needs some development.

Good work though, keep it up, if I could build even nearly as good as you I'd be very proud

Thanks. James Lawrence

Thank you for you suggestion, I'll try adding more detail to improve the look.

 

[Zombiepower]

Nice map you made there

 

[MartijnMC]

I have a few tips for you. First off I wouldn't use pixelart because it really only looks good from two sides. And since you can play on the entire map you could improve this by building in 3 dimensions. Also don't use worldedit for the bottom of islands; make it unique. I like that you use a colour palette, but don't use blocks that have very different colours. It kinda defeats the purpose of a palette, because a palette should add slight differences in colour to a big area. I like some block choises though, as you used end staffs in the christmas tree. Really cool idea.
Anyways keep practicing because this is not up to the standards of Cubecraft yet, but if you keep improving your maps you could reach it one day.

 

[Thefty]

It needs much more detail imo. to make it to the map selection.

 

[DragonSan]

It's a cool theme, but it could use a little more detail and there's a reason cubecraft maps don't use pixelart! Sure it looks good from a side view, but as you move around the map it begins to look kind of stupid. But thats just my opinion. Other than that great job building this!

 

[RockBob4]

Like other have said...
More detail and terraforming.
Also, The islands are way to flat! Add a little snow pile or something.

 

[ParpiaJr]

It needs much more detail imo. to make it to the map selection.

Like other have said...
More detail and terraforming.
Also, The islands are way to flat! Add a little snow pile or something.

It's a cool theme, but it could use a little more detail and there's a reason cubecraft maps don't use pixelart! Sure it looks good from a side view, but as you move around the map it begins to look kind of stupid. But thats just my opinion. Other than that great job building this!

The basic premise of this map is good. Please try to:
• Not make the islands flat. Try and learn VoxelSniper or Worldedit to know how to in fuller detail.
• Add terraforming under the islands. Again, look into VoxelSniper or Worldedit.
• Try not to use PixelArt as a main feature of an island. It is very bland and lacks detail. You can transform the PixelArt of Santa in a stocking into an actual organic. :p

Hope this helps!

I like the map, but it just looks to plain to me. Try and add some texture to the floors e.g slabs. It's a good concept, but in my idea it definitely needs some development.

Good work though, keep it up, if I could build even nearly as good as you I'd be very proud

Thanks. James Lawrence

Is this better detail guys?

 

[Dreym]

Significant improvement, but remove the glass beside the egg. makes it way too easy to protect. Try experimenting using different blocks too. Maybe add some wool or haybale piles. Other than that really good. And I love the pixel art.

 

[Grimmay]

Is this better detail guys?
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I like how it's got more texture, but I still think it's a bit plain. I'm liking the improvements you have made though!

Thanms, James Lawrence

 

[ShadowM00n]

i would like to see the map on eggwars i love it i love your theme i hope it becomse a map on cubecraft

 

[Dreym]

Add Slabs on top of the glowstone lamps instead of a trapdoor.

 

[The_Supermarket]

wow this is one cool, map I personally think it would be more balanced, against hackers, who fly and hide behind other, claustrophobic maps.
Good Idea ParpiaJr
and any admins here, please consider this map, would be awesome for christmas as well.
Ps: Love the pixel art :p

It looks like the Netherlands... flat

 

[zSem_]

Nice idea but it isn't perfect...to flat, Terra forming isn't perfect.try to improve

 

[MooTa]

I think it would be better if you add decoration on the islands

 

[Crystalaxy1]

Looks pretty cool! It could be better if you added a bit less snow, you added loads and loads of snow everywhere, so no matter how much detail you add, the snow stands out too much and all I can notice is snow. Other than that, it looks fab ;D