Builds rhinoscooter1's Builder Application

[rhinoscooter1]

Hello Guys and Gals,
I am posting a builder application I have spent a lot of time on this and I would really like to thank @Efcluke94 for giving me pointers and inspiration.
Pics below.

 

[ModernRevolution]

The buildings are very nice and I like them very much, however your plot doesn't look complete, I would say you should fill the whole plot, and include more terraforming. The buildings themselves look fabulous and I don't see anything wrong with them, just more terraforming.

 

[rhinoscooter1]

The buildings are very nice and I like them very much, however your plot doesn't look complete, I would say you should fill the whole plot, and include more terraforming. The buildings themselves look fabulous and I don't see anything wrong with them, just more terraforming.

Thanks Claudia, I am having some trouble terraforming. But I will try :)

 

[rhinoscooter1]

oh btw plot ID: -9;51

 

[AtomicBirdAss]

I like this a lot, the green roof is a good idea, I wouldnt expect it to turn out this good. But, as Claudia allready mentioned, the plot doesnt look complete. And yeah, TerraForming can be a pain in the ass....
Could you post some pictures of the plot in Default texturepack?
Anyways, keep up the good work ;)

 

[rhinoscooter1]

thanks for all the feedback people <3. Here are some screenshots of the updated plots and with default pack :)

 

[MorganPlayzMc]

Add some custom trees as well

 

[Efcluke94]

Yeah there's not much for me to say, what the others haven't said already.. just finish the plot.

 

[rhinoscooter1]

Pictures I have taken with a little bit more terraforming and stuff :D

 

[AtomicBirdAss]

I like it a lot! Thanks for the screenies with default TP :) I like how you made those bushes, scattered around the plot.

 

[ThatOnePeanutGuy]

I think that you still need some work on your terraforming, (Still seems a little flat, and maybe work on arches, bigger hills/mountains etc.) but your buildings are amazing. I'm really impressed with the green roofed one. Good luck, and just keep practicing terraforming :D

 

[rhinoscooter1]

thanks :D

 

[Oceanical]

I visited the plot, and I like the block scheme of it, especially the sandstone and wood. Although, there are a few factors to the plot that just irk me a little cause they don't seem to fit in imo, Like the random structure made of dark oak wood & variety of stone bricks. Also, some of the terraforming like the huge hill, looks a little unatural.. try to flatten out the terraform in a way that still makes it have depth. Most of all, juust try to blend the plot together and make it more smoother in general. It needs to look more complete & together. Overall, nice job though, the plot just needs a little oomph. A little more terraforming, and some more structures, and it'll look complete :) Nice job rynoooo.

 

[rhinoscooter1]

I visited the plot, and I like the block scheme of it, especially the sandstone and wood. Although, there are a few factors to the plot that just irk me a little cause they don't seem to fit in imo, Like the random structure made of dark oak wood & variety of stone bricks. Also, some of the terraforming like the huge hill, looks a little unatural.. try to flatten out the terraform in a way that still makes it have depth. Most of all, juust try to blend the plot together and make it more smoother in general. It needs to look more complete & together. Overall, nice job though, the plot just needs a little oomph. A little more terraforming, and some more structures, and it'll look complete :) Nice job rynoooo.

Thanks CaliDogean, I will try my best to terraform more and make it look more natural

 

[Oceanical]

Thanks CaliDogean, I will try my best to terraform more and make it look more natural

Calidogean?! :D Finally a nickname I love.

 

[rhinoscooter1]

Calidogean?! :D Finally a nickname I love.

spread the word, calidogean is in town

 

[Divvy1]

I'd agree with Claudia on this one, and try to make the path more random, I see that there are no bits that go left and right, it's kind of like it's a WorldEditted rectangle which you did //set gravel,grass.

Basically what I'd say you need to do:
Terraforming, More natural paths.

But all in all, despite those 2 things, I like it a lot. :D

 

[rhinoscooter1]

I'd agree with Claudia on this one, and try to make the path more random, I see that there are no bits that go left and right, it's kind of like it's a WorldEditted rectangle which you did //set gravel,grass.

Basically what I'd say you need to do:
Terraforming, More natural paths.

But all in all, despite those 2 things, I like it a lot. :D

I have updated it a bit more if you want to check it out, but I have not yet posted those pictures

 

[prazed]

Looks great, gl!

 

[rhinoscooter1]

More pictures of mah updated plot :DDDDDD (dont know why I did so many faces but meh TOLO as they say)