Builds Skywars map: food

[sasemboy]

This food-themed map is built by sasemboy and Erik378. There isn't a mid, but there are many other islands were you don't spawn instead. 8 players can play the map. If you accept the map i will send the zip file to your skype/email/whatever.

 

[Younisco]

Overall, it needs a lot of work. First of all, don't build pixelart unless it's to compliment the build. The melon - if it's what you're trying to achieve - needs to be 3D. Why is there cake on chicken? And a random lava ritual demonic structure looking thing...? If you try and fixate on the theme a bit more, and create terrain to accompany it, it might be good :)

 

[sasemboy]

Overall, it needs a lot of work. First of all, don't build pixelart unless it's to compliment the build. The melon - if it's what you're trying to achieve - needs to be 3D. Why is there cake on chicken? And a random lava ritual demonic structure looking thing...? If you try and fixate on the theme a bit more, and create terrain to accompany it, it might be good :)

ok, thanks for your reply! im going to edit it for a bit.

 

[sasemboy]

ok, thanks for your reply! im going to edit it for a bit.

The screenshots are now changed!<---- cake island
<----- the melons are now in 3d
<------ the "random lava ritual demonic structure looking thing" is now a pumpkin pie

 

[Younisco]

Okayyy, now it's starting to take shape :D

1) Make the watermelon have more of a shape.
2) Possible terrain underneath.
3) Still don't understand the hay on the cake....

 

[Cheez]

The maps kinda messy as I can't really see a middle "main" island. Try to have the outer islands all in a circular shape and a main one in the middle. Nice idea though.

 

[ImABubbleHead]

The theme is good, however it's all a bit random and lacks structural image. At the moment it looks like a scatter of floating foods. xd

The maps kinda messy as I can't really see a middle "main" island. Try to have the outer islands all in a circular shape and a main one in the middle. Nice idea though.

^^^

 

[tiger101tiger]

The maps kinda messy as I can't really see a middle "main" island.

There isn't a mid, but there are many other islands were you don't spawn instead.

I think it is a good idea, but it needs more work. I'm not good at building skywars maps, so I cant help you with it.

 

[sasemboy]

Okayyy, now it's starting to take shape :D

1) Make the watermelon have more of a shape.
2) Possible terrain underneath.
3) Still don't understand the hay on the cake....

-----> you can make a hay block with 9 wheat, and you can make a cake with wheat. Now you understand? It's a little farm...

The theme is good, however it's all a bit random and lacks structural image. At the moment it looks like a scatter of floating foods. xd

^^^

xd youre right

 

[sasemboy]

Maybe it isn't a better idea to make a new skywars map

 

[tiger101tiger]

....Maybe its a better idea to create a new skywars map...:oops:

Don't give up! Just keep working at it and it will become perfect! CCGN builders work extremely hard on skywars maps, so just keep tweaking stuff a little bit at a time, and then it will become an amazing skywars map.
Here is a suggestion on how to make it better from me:

• only make 3 different types of islands
• There should be a middle. for example: a salad bowl with different fruits in it
• don't use the island with the hay and cake, because it gives whoever gets that island an advantage with endless amounts of food
• don't use the island with lots of melon blocks, for the same reason as the hay and cake island
• Instead of having the carrots behind the islands, make them a midway mark to the center.

That's all of the suggestions I have, so keep trying and it will become amazing!

 

[sasemboy]

Don't give up!

ok, i've changed my message.

 

[Komodо]

Every time people add random +1's so now it's my time: +1

 

[sasemboy]

Don't give up! Just keep working at it and it will become perfect! CCGN builders work extremely hard on skywars maps, so just keep tweaking stuff a little bit at a time, and then it will become an amazing skywars map.
Here is a suggestion on how to make it better from me:

• only make 3 different types of islands
• There should be a middle. for example: a salad bowl with different fruits in it
• don't use the island with the hay and cake, because it gives whoever gets that island an advantage with endless amounts of food
• don't use the island with lots of melon blocks, for the same reason as the hay and cake island
• Instead of having the carrots behind the islands, make them a midway mark to the center.

That's all of the suggestions I have, so keep trying and it will become amazing!

I have recreated the map! I'm going to start a new map suggestion! Link: Click here.

 

[RoyalisticMaphre]

Okey. Its bad sorry :(.
1) Create a mid
2) Put ores in some fruits

 

[RoyalisticMaphre]

3) 8? Pls bests is 12 oke?