I like the idea of cuboid islands but the theme and the build look really basic and kinda boring.
The thing that bothers me the most is that you completly copied the tent from this tutorial:
I mean, taking inspiration is alright, but copying a tutorial isn't really the best, I think you can agree with me. I know making a tent is hard in minecraft (I tried to build some of them yesterday) but copying a tutorial isn't the solution if you were to put it on a server like Cubecraft.
The trees look like trees that you could find in a normal minecraft singleplayer world, with just a bit of more blocks at the base of them. I'd suggest you to try to make some more interesting shapes that would for sure stand out more in your map. Also, as Andy said, I'd add more trees. If I think about camping I'd immagine myself being surrounded by a lot of trees, not just one or even zero per islands
Another issue I see is the coloring of the terrain, it looks like you used //replace (ids) to color the grass, I'd suggest you to use GoPaint to make some more interesting shades or if you don't have access to it I'd suggest you to use //replace #simplex(size)(ids), which would give a nicer effect than just a normal replace.
The middle, which should be the most important islands is the most boring islands of your map, at least in my opinion.
As I said before the build looks really basic, nothing stands out. The only unique thing about this map I can see is the square islands, which I like. Also, I think the map is too big for a 2 players skywars map.
I'm sorry but for me it's a no. You could try to make it more interesting, but I don't know if I'd change my vote: the theme is just too basic and I'd like to see things more unusual. Anyways I appreaciate that you guys built a map for the server, I'd like to see other maps from you. Good luck.
