Builds [SOLO SKYWARS] Selva

[_akookie_]

Hi! I'm a not very famous YouTuber who made some SW maps because I created a tournament and I wanted to have unique maps. This is one of the few I've done with some help from friends and subscribers. However, the ideas are mine. Hope you like it c:

-Creator: _akookie_
- Map name: I called this map Selva because Jungle was already taken, so I'm Spanish and I decided to name it likes this. But you can suggest me new names as well as possible improvements.
- Description: 12 islands (3 chests each), 1 sub-mid (4 chests), mid (5 chests) and 4 more in top of the trees.

I'm new at building maps, but some people suggested me posting my maps to CubeCraft.

 

[Matigames999]

This is a very good map I agree in adding this map to the server

 

[Kloska]

Some parts look a bit messy or are annoying for gameplay, such as having vines in a cramped space or the leave-bridge being scattered and going around the island instead of only between the two islands.
I think it's quite a basic (but not bad looking) map, but with a bit of cleaning up I think the gameplay will be great, hence I voted yes.

 

[Axyy]

As Kloska said, some parts of the map can be improved, especially gameplay-wise. I love the map layout and the islands look pretty decent, especially the trees, wow. :o

I wouldn't mind this getting added into the game!

 

[HUGOMIX_07 YT]

Nice map! I voted yes

 

[Deleted member 294498]

Enjoy my yes vote ;)

I really like easy and plain maps though, there aren't much of them.
Example: Trees and Tron aren't that ''complex'' but still enjoyable to play!

 

[_akookie_]

Some parts look a bit messy or are annoying for gameplay, such as having vines in a cramped space or the leave-bridge being scattered and going around the island instead of only between the two islands.
I think it's quite a basic (but not bad looking) map, but with a bit of cleaning up I think the gameplay will be great, hence I voted yes.

Thanks for your anwser. I was totally agree about the vines, so I removed all of them. I also did some other changes, as you can see.

 

[Lecura]

I vote yes! This map looks great!

 

[RooAlts]

I will not lie to you, I love the map so you know how I vote.:)

 

[Queen Ualala]

I’m tired of seeing maps with the following themes:
Grassy, Jungle, Ruined, Plains, Stationary, Snowy, desert theme.

I’m voting no

 

[FireExcalibur10]

Hola! No esta del todo mal el mapa, pero te voy a dar unas cuantas recomendaciones a seguir para tener en cuenta a la hora de hacer mapas.
Primero de todo el titulo del mapa tiene que ser en Inglés por la normativa del servidor, pero bueno eso es lo menos relevante.
Ahora si, los aspectos generales: El diseño esta bastante bien elaborado pero hay algunas cosas que no concuerdan entre si, por ejemplo las islas pequeñitas de las esquinas, no hay espacio para el PvP (recomendaria quitarlas y substituirlas por una normal, asi el mapa llega a los 16 jugadores y es mas interesante) . En las islas principales donde spawnean los jugadores no dejas el terreno plano para el pvp, nadie quiere luchar en una montaña donde apenas puedes moverte. Los arboles estan demasiado detallados con esas lianas, yo quitaria la mayor parte de ellas, tanto de los arboles como de debajo de las islas, debajo de las islas queda muy mal y los jugadores podrian quejarse respecto a eso. Podrias hacer la parte baja de las islas mas voluminosa añadiendo mas capas de bloques, intenta mezclar piedra y cobblestone con andesita, asi tendras mas tonalidades de grises.

 

[_akookie_]

I’m tired of seeing maps with the following themes:
Grassy, Jungle, Ruined, Plains, Stationary, Snowy, desert theme.

I’m voting no

honestly, agree with you

 

[_akookie_]

Hola! No esta del todo mal el mapa, pero te voy a dar unas cuantas recomendaciones a seguir para tener en cuenta a la hora de hacer mapas.
Primero de todo el titulo del mapa tiene que ser en Inglés por la normativa del servidor, pero bueno eso es lo menos relevante.
Ahora si, los aspectos generales: El diseño esta bastante bien elaborado pero hay algunas cosas que no concuerdan entre si, por ejemplo las islas pequeñitas de las esquinas, no hay espacio para el PvP (recomendaria quitarlas y substituirlas por una normal, asi el mapa llega a los 16 jugadores y es mas interesante) . En las islas principales donde spawnean los jugadores no dejas el terreno plano para el pvp, nadie quiere luchar en una montaña donde apenas puedes moverte. Los arboles estan demasiado detallados con esas lianas, yo quitaria la mayor parte de ellas, tanto de los arboles como de debajo de las islas, debajo de las islas queda muy mal y los jugadores podrian quejarse respecto a eso. Podrias hacer la parte baja de las islas mas voluminosa añadiendo mas capas de bloques, intenta mezclar piedra y cobblestone con andesita, asi tendras mas tonalidades de grises.

Buenas, muchas gracias por tu aportación. Finalmente, quité todas las lianas. Por otra parte, me parece interesante lo que dices de poner las islas de las esquinas. Puse solo 12 porque el torneo lo organicé para que fuera 12vs12, cuando lo copien para meterlo le haré las modificaciones que me has dicho.
Y sí, la verdad es que no me curré mucho la base de las islas, pero eso lo arreglo c;

 

[Finixly]

Thanks for your anwser. I was totally agree about the vines, so I removed all of them. I also did some other changes, as you can see.

Mind adding some pictures without using a texturepack? I can barely see how it actually will look like. Thanks!

Also I think you should add some leaves back to the map, definitely not as much as before but just some. For example around the tree's

 

[Nutuu]

Oh wow! This map actually reminds me of a skywars map I used to play on like 7 years ago!
It's exactly the same style and I indeed loved the map. I get the great nostalgia type of feeling from this map and that leads me to voting yes.
I love the shape of the player islands!

I still do feel like there are a bit too much vines. I see they give the right vibe to the map but it might cause lag for some players.

 

[_akookie_]

Mind adding some pictures without using a texturepack? I can barely see how it actually will look like. Thanks!

Also I think you should add some leaves back to the map, defin
itely not as much as before but just some. For example around the tree's

These are the changes I made. I am not convinced at all about the new shape, because I modified it and make it even more flat to improve pvp area, but I will make another cape under the one which is lower.
What do you think about the base and all I said to you?

 

[FireExcalibur10]

These are the changes I made. I am not convinced at all about the new shape, because I modified it and make it even more flat to improve pvp area, but I will make another cape under the one which is lower.
What do you think about the base and all I said to you?

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Quita algunas vallas de madera. La parte de abajo esta bastante bien. Quizas quita los muros de piedra.

 

[ShinyArrow]

I really like this map, that’s why I voted yes.

But one thing I think can be improved is the cave on your photos. The cave is just a square, it would look better if it is natural.

Spoiler: What I mean

https://imgur.com/CIMqZms

 

[HetIsRuben]

Its a nice map! Great Work!

 

[_akookie_]

I really like this map, that’s why I voted yes.

But one thing I think can be improved is the cave on your photos. The cave is just a square, it would look better if it is natural.

Spoiler: What I mean

https://imgur.com/CIMqZms

I see your point, I will try to change it. Can you send the example again, please? It doesn't appear.