Builds Can y'all tell me what to improve on?

[DaGreenerCreeper]

Well, yeah. I made this in the space of 6-8 hours and would say that it looks (reasonably) good. The name I would have given it would have been 'Botany', hence a slightly degraded greenhouse in a forest.

Obviously, this is only just one island and I would have to build the middle of the map also, but I would really appreciate your comments and how I could improve / what I could add to the build. :)

 

[ToastO_O]

You Don't Have To Improve It .. It Looks cool anyway

 

[StopWalking]

It looks cool so far, but you need to improve the island it self. If you can change that it would be great!

 

[Gainfullterror]

Islands are a bit flat, too much foliage, barely any open areas, the roots go down to far & the islands are a bit too small for fun gameplay.
That's all I can say right now, and it'd be great if you could improve in those areas.

 

[Despacito 2]

Islands are a bit flat, too much foliage, barely any open areas, the roots go down to far & the islands are a bit too small for fun gameplay.
That's all I can say right now, and it'd be great if you could improve in those areas.

This ^

And don't use tall grass ;)

 

[lilHatch]

Maybe make the island a bit bigger for pvp, or make things on the the island small. I think making the island bigger would be a better idea though.

 

[GummiWummiBear]

I like the custom tree however, I feel like the vines are a bit over-done. There are some parts of the tree where there are three vines in a row (going horizontally obviously) and it doesn't make the custom tree look aesthetically pleasing. I didn't really get the idea that the object in the middle was a green house it was more of a tube, perhaps make it more of a rectangular house shape with a peaked glass roof to simulate more of a house, to make it look degraded just break some blocks here and there until it looks good (make a whole green house and then add and remove from there). For a two player map it is a bit small like @Gainfullterror, @Dotsially and @HatchyIsHere has said. I like the idea and love the concept. The bottom of the island looks amazing and great job. Sorry for this lengthy reply but, I always try to give feedback as clear and as helpful as possible. Keep up the good work and it's looking amazing.

 

[Kerro]

oh nice man looks really cool for a eggwars solo map and i love to play eggwars with friends

 

[Caaaaarman]

That's Really Good! :)

 

[Twann]

You can really nice build, but you are a beginner. I love the tree and maybe more space for pvp? @ItsDavey_ can you give him some helpfull tips that would be nice! ;)

 

[Elegant Swirl]

I think the island itself is really good but some small details I think need to be tweaked. One of them is that I think the randomness of different materials for the floor is a little bit overdone since there is gravel, grass, podzol, dirt, coarse dirt, and grass paths. I think if you lessened the use of different materials on the flooring it would be a bit better. Overall I think this could potentially be a really great map if you just changed it a little bit!

 

[ItsDavey_]

Pretty cool! I like the tree!
But adding Some more details would make it better :v
I love to see different builds from members!! Keep going!

 

[RayzMC]

Well, yeah. I made this in the space of 6-8 hours and would say that it looks (reasonably) good. The name I would have given it would have been 'Botany', hence a slightly degraded greenhouse in a forest.

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Obviously, this is only just one island and I would have to build the middle of the map also, but I would really appreciate your comments and how I could improve / what I could add to the build. :)

Is there a way up to the egg?
If so, I don't really any need of improvements :)

 

[DanDaDino]

I don't really like the use of tall grass, but other than that, looks rally good!
You could possibly improve the bottom of the island a bit though.

Looking good!

 

[DaGreenerCreeper]

So a list that I have devised of all your suggestions:
- Less flat-ness
- More open areas
- Larger island
- No tallgrass and less grass/flowers
- Less vines
- Change the greenhouse
- Smaller palette
- More details
- Improve the bottom
And obviously, I need to thank y'all for your suggestions. <3

 

[Fristey]

Well, yeah. I made this in the space of 6-8 hours and would say that it looks (reasonably) good. The name I would have given it would have been 'Botany', hence a slightly degraded greenhouse in a forest.

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Obviously, this is only just one island and I would have to build the middle of the map also, but I would really appreciate your comments and how I could improve / what I could add to the build. :)

This looks pretty cool! :o

 

[Smanbg]

I agree with @DaGreenerCreeper ! Less flatness, bigger island for bigger battles and more details. Anyway - it's awesome !

 

[CraftCreatures]

This looks amazing!

 

[DenisNotDanish]

looks good, old style, love it.