Builds [DUELS ARENA] - Valley

[ImJunior]

A little backstory on this map, in the begging this map was meant to be a snow map. I didn't know snow and ice were not allowed. I was about to submit this map and then saw there were rules on what blocks you can not use. So I decided to remove all the snow and make it a nature map. I will also add pictures of the snow map.

Also, this is the first serious map I ever build. Feedback is always welcome!

Creator: @ImJunior

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[ciwa]

I like the details, but it's not as detailed as the builds of the current builders. I don't know if it is your first map, but this is an above average build. Maybe use some help from current builders to learn new things etc.

 

[ImJunior]

I like the details, but it's not as detailed as the builds of the current builders. I don't know if it is your first map, but this is an above average build. Maybe use some help from current builders to learn new things etc.

I sure will, this indeed is my first map. Thank you for your honesty! ;)

 

[RobinDn]

A little backstory on this map, in the begging this map was meant to be a snow map. I didn't know snow and ice were not allowed. I was about to submit this map and then saw there were rules on what blocks you can not use. So I decided to remove all the snow and make it a nature map. I will also add pictures of the snow map.

Also, this is the first serious map I ever build. Feedback is always welcome!

Creator: @ImJunior

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It looks really nice, but like Ciwa said to ask some tips to the builders.
For the rest, I wish you the best of luck with your next maps.
Can't wait to see the next one :)

 

[Deleted member 481668]

I didn't expect that you can build on a high niveau. Some of your details are very good, I love the snow duel map and every detail on each corner. Yes indeed, you can improve many things but this map isn't bad it's good very good. Keep it up bro it looks amazing! <3

 

[ImJunior]

Thank you @RobinDn and @Voltage! ♥

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

It’s nice but the details are lacking and there are already 2 or more oriental maps added or will be added so it takes away from originality. If some changes could be made to make it look better I’ll change my vote.

 

[ImJunior]

It’s nice but the details are lacking and there are already 2 or more oriental maps added or will be added so it takes away from originality. If some changes could be made to make it look better I’ll change my vote.

Thank you for your honesty, what details could I add or change so it would be better?

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

Thank you for your honesty, what details could I add or change so it would be better?

The tree looks very odd, birch slabs never typically look good with this style of trees, Im in a phone so it’s hard to link, but if you look at my accepted blossoms maps you can see a general example of how the trees should look. I’d also recommend using full bark acacia wood. The leaves in the ground look pretty odd, the leaves don’t make to much since because the tree leaves are not green, climbing up to the temple is pretty bad, and can easily become camping spots, I could list more but you get the idea.

 

[Deleted member 469419]

It's look amazing o_O!

Great job with the build!

(Personally, I like more the snowy terrain)

 

[ImJunior]

I will edit the map later today, thanks for all the tips! @_The13thDoctor_
Thank you @Sergiio12 :)

 

[Schroll]

For your first build, this is not bad at all

 

[ImJunior]

For your first build, this is not bad at all

Thanks :)

 

[Andyyy]

It would be nice if you included images without shaders as

This is just so everyone has a fair chance to get their map accepted as some people cannot get shaders. There's no point making a map that looks good with shaders if it doesn't without. I'm pretty sure you can make anything look beautiful with the right shaders so it's really hard to judge how the map would look without them.

 

[LordSidi0us]

Looks very well, detailed enough (for me) but isn’t it like too large for duels map?Maybe it’s from the perspective but it seems a little bit bigger than I wanted.

 

[ImJunior]

It would be nice if you included images without shaders asView attachment 160090
This is just so everyone has a fair chance to get their map accepted as some people cannot get shaders. There's no point making a map that looks good with shaders if it doesn't without. I'm pretty sure you can make anything look beautiful with the right shaders so it's really hard to judge how the map would look without them.

I didn't know, I will change these pictures in the evening. Thank you.

Looks very well, detailed enough (for me) but isn’t it like too large for duels map?Maybe it’s from the perspective but it seems a little bit bigger than I wanted.

Thank you and it's really not that big, it might look big but it isn't longer than a regular duels map.

 

[LordSidi0us]

I didn't know, I will change these pictures in the evening. Thank you.

Thank you and it's really not that big, it might look big but it isn't longer than a regular duels map.

Then its completely acceptable for me

 

[Finixly]

I do rather like the snowy version, but since it isn't allowed you've made a good choice with replacing them!

The "nature" theme is fine as well, there is enough space for PvP, the details are fine. But I personally don't like the big arch in the middle, maybe you can improve it by placing some blocks underneath it, or changing the "block-mix" or adding some more leaves.

I'm not a builder, so perhaps I missed some things. But in my opinion this is an above average map!
You get my yes :)

 

[IWontHurtYou]

Great! I 'd like to see both maps added.

 

[ImJunior]

I added more detail to the arch, do you think it looks better now? @Finixly