Nice job buddy cool vid but I do have a few tips, remember it is just feedback you can ignore it if you want,
1) Make the video a little shorter
2) put (non-copyright) music in the background.
3) Edit a bit more I suggest that you use soney vegas pro 13
The good points!
1) You talk much in the vid and not the awkward silences.
2) Your thumbnails are pretty good.
3) The channel layout is great
4) Your voice is good for a youtuber.
5) Your recording software is on point.
6) Your pvp skills are on-point as well xD