Builds Egg Wars Map

[_The13thDoctor_]

I don't wanna offend you or something, but I'm just being honest, the map design is not good, and definitely not good enough for a map for the server, maybe you should watch some building videos and take some tips.

Leave and never come back here if your going to be one of those people

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

Some people want really OP maps, so it would be nice if there were a few really OP maps available for those kinds of people

Thank you very much

 

[DragonSan]

Leave and never come back here if your going to be one of those people

Dude, you need to learn how to handle criticism. You have posted your map on here to be judged, so let people judge it. He already said 'I don't wanna offend you', so why are you taking it so personally?

I also agree with him in that the map quality isn't good enough yet. Compare it to the maps currently in use - it's not quite reaching that standard, so it won't get accepted just yet. (I've already said this twice, but you seem to be ignoring my posts...)

 

[JerrySox]

Structure being used: *Not offical Ideas

Cherry trees
Candy canes
(Your island is a melting cupcake)
(Spawn is a giant Candy Witchhouse on a cake)
(Almost Center is Cookie)
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The theme does not go well together, a candy witch house....On a cake. Honestly just do a ginger bread house that's melting on a cake..

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

Dude, you need to learn how to handle criticism. You have posted your map on here to be judged, so let people judge it. He already said 'I don't wanna offend you', so why are you taking it so personally?

I also agree with him in that the map quality isn't good enough yet. Compare it to the maps currently in use - it's not quite reaching that standard, so it won't get accepted just yet. (I've already said this twice, but you seem to be ignoring my posts...)

I read every post but its that im sick of hearing you complain and not helping and being so Over critical like its more that you should have and I can take your critisisem but the way you put it is not right now end it with that aspect of me thats no "perfect" ok

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

The theme does not go well together, a candy witch house....On a cake. Honestly just do a ginger bread house that's melting on a cake..

Thats kinda what I ment XD belive me I spend lots of time working on all of this

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

Dude, you need to learn how to handle criticism. You have posted your map on here to be judged, so let people judge it. He already said 'I don't wanna offend you', so why are you taking it so personally?

I also agree with him in that the map quality isn't good enough yet. Compare it to the maps currently in use - it's not quite reaching that standard, so it won't get accepted just yet. (I've already said this twice, but you seem to be ignoring my posts...)

Also wharts your problem Im just aggreing on what Flareon Said that was not preticulary nice and he could have worded it better I think your cool man but think befor you type because your acting like some other people with additudes and hard (to hard) critisising

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

Dude calm down im working on this map ok its really stressfull right now and its difficult ok im trying and doig my best so if you have any ideas TELL ME if you dont then why are you still here complaining and not giving a helping hand

Dude, you need to learn how to handle criticism. You have posted your map on here to be judged, so let people judge it. He already said 'I don't wanna offend you', so why are you taking it so personally?

I also agree with him in that the map quality isn't good enough yet. Compare it to the maps currently in use - it's not quite reaching that standard, so it won't get accepted just yet. (I've already said this twice, but you seem to be ignoring my posts...)

 

[DragonSan]

so if you have any ideas TELL ME if you dont then why are you still here complaining and not giving a helping hand

Along with my initial opinion and suggesting ideas & tips, I wrote this in my first post:

If you'd like my help building any of this, just pm me and if I'm available I'll lend a helping hand :D

Never received a reply though. I'm willing to help you out...

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Dude calm down im working on this map ok its really stressfull right now and its difficult ok im trying and doig my best

I understand that you are trying your best, I am not trying to attack you in any way believe me. I'm sorry if I upset you. I'm just trying to give honest constructive criticism that might help you to build the map a little better...

Look at it this way, if you want me to lie and say something like:

'OMG DIS MAP BOOTIFUL I MAST HAVE IT RIGHT DIS INSTANT SAMONE COLL HEAD ADMINISTRATA DIS BETTA DAN AIR!!!!1!1!!!'

Then I will, but you will go on thinking the map is good enough to be added. Then when the staff see it, they will probably not even consider adding it because it hasn't been developed well enough. I (and other people who have commented) are trying to help you, that is all!

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

Look at it this way, if you want me to lie and say something like:

'OMG DIS MAP BOOTIFUL I MAST HAVE IT RIGHT DIS INSTANT SAMONE COLL HEAD ADMINISTRATA DIS BETTA DAN AIR!!!!1!1!!!'

That is kinda offending my work and that statment is basicly saying my work is not good enough and you should drop it because your al ready to busy and honestly no one cares
Then I will, but you will go on thinking the map is good enough to be added. Then when the staff see it, they will probably not even consider adding it because it hasn't been developed well enough. I (and other people who have commented) are trying to help you, (except me) that is all![/QUOTE]

At this point I dont want your help >:(

 

[DragonSan]

Look at it this way, if you want me to lie and say something like:

'OMG DIS MAP BOOTIFUL I MAST HAVE IT RIGHT DIS INSTANT SAMONE COLL HEAD ADMINISTRATA DIS BETTA DAN AIR!!!!1!1!!!'

That is kinda offending my work and that statment is basicly saying my work is not good enough and you should drop it because your al ready to busy and honestly no one cares
Then I will, but you will go on thinking the map is good enough to be added. Then when the staff see it, they will probably not even consider adding it because it hasn't been developed well enough. I (and other people who have commented) are trying to help you, (except me) that is all!

At this point I dont want your help :mad:[/QUOTE]

Alright well good luck. Hope it gets submitted and I wish you all the best.

 

[TheQueenWaddle]

Look at it this way, if you want me to lie and say something like:

'OMG DIS MAP BOOTIFUL I MAST HAVE IT RIGHT DIS INSTANT SAMONE COLL HEAD ADMINISTRATA DIS BETTA DAN AIR!!!!1!1!!!'

That is kinda offending my work and that statment is basicly saying my work is not good enough and you should drop it because your al ready to busy and honestly no one cares
Then I will, but you will go on thinking the map is good enough to be added. Then when the staff see it, they will probably not even consider adding it because it hasn't been developed well enough. I (and other people who have commented) are trying to help you, (except me) that is all!
At this point I dont want your help :mad:

Jeez.
If you can't handle ANY criticism, I don't understand why you posted your own work publicly to the internet.
It's not our job to help. We, as players, are telling you whether or not WE want to play on it. After all, you're not the only one who's going to be playing it. So take the comments and run with them, or continue backlashing against anyone who has a suggestion. We're not going to give you white lies to boost your ego; that's your mom's job.

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

Guys JUST DROP THE FRIKKEN CRITISING STUFF OK WTH IS WITH YOU!!! YOU CNT LEAVE ME ALONE IM SO STREESED AND ANGRY AND DA_STEEL_DRAGON HAS TO COME IN AND THEN HE STARTS FIGHTING WITH ME OVER STUPID... LISTEN QUEENWADDEL THAT WAS MY PERSONAL STATEMENT NOT FOR YOU TO ADD TO IDC IF PEOPLE HELP OR NOT I JUST WANT TO MAKE CUBECRAFT BETTER btw leave my mom out of this...
oh and thx for the support Da Steel Dragon :D
Also im takeing your critising info affect and add it to my work but it dosent help if your going to act like Da Steel Dragon did with that comment and you too listen I like critisisem but not at this time not now just calmy give what i can improve on and what i did well ok im gona eat some nachos see ya

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

Jeez.
If you can't handle ANY criticism, I don't understand why you posted your own work publicly to the internet.
It's not our job to help. We, as players, are telling you whether or not WE want to play on it. After all, you're not the only one who's going to be playing it. So take the comments and run with them, or continue backlashing against anyone who has a suggestion. We're not going to give you white lies to boost your ego; that's your mom's job.

Actually saying that purple part I did not edit how is that critisim??? like how? Only Wondering

 

[TheQueenWaddle]

I can't understand a single thing you're saying. If you want suggestions, I'll give them to you.

• Center is ridiculously square. The building looks unnaturally.... well, square. Give it a unique bodice.
• No terraforming at all for mid. These are islands, not platforms. Add things to the bottom of the island.
• Give it an identity. I see mushrooms, then glass, then pink wool, then quartz? There's no cohesiveness.
• Get rid of the signs. Plain and simple, they're not necessary.
• Give center uniformity. You don't need those toilets or elevator/buttons or whatever. They're just very distracting; it's too much.
• I might have missed it in your videos, but I don't see an egg anywhere.
• Delete the Glowstone. Just... no. It's just too much.

I could keep going, but this is a good chunk of what I think should be improved.

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

I can't understand a single thing you're saying. If you want suggestions, I'll give them to you.

• Center is ridiculously square. The building looks unnaturally.... well, square. Give it a unique bodice.
• No terraforming at all for mid. These are islands, not platforms. Add things to the bottom of the island.
• Give it an identity. I see mushrooms, then glass, then pink wool, then quartz? There's no cohesiveness.
• Get rid of the signs. Plain and simple, they're not necessary.
• Give center uniformity. You don't need those toilets or elevator/buttons or whatever. They're just very distracting; it's too much.
• I might have missed it in your videos, but I don't see an egg anywhere.
• Delete the Glowstone. Just... no. It's just too much.

I could keep going, but this is a good chunk of what I think should be improved.

Egg is on top of the cherry at the starting island give everyone a tought time getting to obi it ot break it ;)

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

 

[Deeds]

The update looks nice man!
Keep it up.

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

So...What now

 

[JamesGamez]

I would play this map all the time but I think u need to get rid of time or make a new thread saying if they can add it.