Working on another map and im looking for some help/feedback with what I have so far
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Hi! It indeed looks cool! as like an halloween map or something right?
On the first picture it looks great! but on the second picture I kinda see that the shape seems more like a z than a circle. (might be just the angle)
I feel like the other side is empty compared to the other with the tree, so I'd say another trunk would look good.
If it is an halloween map, maybe a few different size pumpkins would be cool stacked on top of each other to fill spare space?
On the first picture it looks great! but on the second picture I kinda see that the shape seems more like a z than a circle. (might be just the angle)
I feel like the other side is empty compared to the other with the tree, so I'd say another trunk would look good.
If it is an halloween map, maybe a few different size pumpkins would be cool stacked on top of each other to fill spare space?
yeah, thats just the angle. But I will try putting another tree in, and maybe also some pumpkins
i don't have any suggestions you know iam bad at designs But I don't feel comfortable in it. I feel that something is missing. you know i think is the glasses on the floor i don't like it you can replace it with any thing else it will be better.
Since I just can't give you advice on how the map looks, I mean look at it. And look at what I build, yours infinitely better since mine is a null.
But I can give some critique/tips on it as an Eggwars island.
Slime blocks:
They look amazing, but I don't think they should be in an Eggwars map like this. A lot, spread out and therefore easy to jump on. This will make players build up really high and just drop and take no fall damage. This could a design choice but I wouldn't like it in an Eggwars map.
Something else that bothers me with slime blocks is that you can't really jump on them (from a static position). And the way they are placed makes it a perfect place the run up to, spam blocks behind you and heal. Which now isn't possible, quite the opposite in fact. You can't even jump up properly on a slime block.
Glass:
The glass you used look astonishing but I even use glass to make players lag back in Eggwars since it gives a ridicules amount of lag... So you might want to consult devs or designers on this issue and how much glass one can use.
Under island spots:
You made some cool looking things under the island which make the island look better. But the way they are now, they can be easily jumped on and used as a camping spot. And because it's made out of slime blocks, you won't even take fall damage.
But I can give some critique/tips on it as an Eggwars island.
Slime blocks:
They look amazing, but I don't think they should be in an Eggwars map like this. A lot, spread out and therefore easy to jump on. This will make players build up really high and just drop and take no fall damage. This could a design choice but I wouldn't like it in an Eggwars map.
Something else that bothers me with slime blocks is that you can't really jump on them (from a static position). And the way they are placed makes it a perfect place the run up to, spam blocks behind you and heal. Which now isn't possible, quite the opposite in fact. You can't even jump up properly on a slime block.
Glass:
The glass you used look astonishing but I even use glass to make players lag back in Eggwars since it gives a ridicules amount of lag... So you might want to consult devs or designers on this issue and how much glass one can use.
Under island spots:
You made some cool looking things under the island which make the island look better. But the way they are now, they can be easily jumped on and used as a camping spot. And because it's made out of slime blocks, you won't even take fall damage.
i was actually going for the "safe spots" to jump on as a more interesting tactic to make the map more interesting, But i could also change it out for emerald blocks and glass.
yeah, I will talk to someone about this, thanks :D
I actually thought about this and they are basically impossible to jump to ( i tried a lot) they are just secluded enough so that they cant be jumped on.
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