Firstly, the build is terrible. You need to work on your islands because as of right now they are upside down pyramids, just plain, flat and boring. When first looking at this it hurt my eyes, not because it was ugly or anything, but because i was confused, it doesnt have a sense of order or planning, its just dumped into a minecraft world, i suggest building stuff like this in a void world.
The colour pallet doesnt work for what this is trying to be, is just a bunch of colors that dont look well together in what you have built.
Now secondly, This is criticism that you should not take with hatred or anger, but take it as constructive criticism, i have not said any of this to offend you purposely, and if i do so then so be it. If i am being harsh then so be it. This is my builders point of view.
When i first starting building on minecraft, i built like this, and it was terrible, but after getting negative feed back from people, i improved to the point where i am able to build massive things such as
Now before you start getting triggered because i didnt say this was amazing and deserves a 10/10. This is the Honest truth, you are just bad at building, but with help you can get much better. Everyone has the potential to be able to build.
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You post this on the forums for all to see, i am not going to sit back and say this is great, because you obviously need help to become a good builder and giving this harsh criticism is a step closer.