Builds Racing Track - Eggwars Map (edited)

[MartijnMC]

Hello everyone,

This is my new eggwars map.
This map has 7 islands; one middle island and six three-player islands. Every player-island has 1 iron generator, 1 gold generator and 1 diamond generator. The middle has 2 iron generators, 2 gold generators and 1 diamond generator.

--Edit--
+ made 3 different islands, instead of 1 island
--> added birch and oak trees and different cars on the different islands
+ added flags and other decoration for the track on the middle island
+ added caves and different trees on the middle island
+ made the islands less flat

Here are some screenshots:


I'll give the download of the map to the staff if the map is good enough to be added to the server.
@Efcluke94
@HuracanFTW
@Stefanvld
@MaxvD
@Alex_de_Grote

 

[Stefanvld]

It needs some work, but it looks awesome!

 

[xMegaGamerx]

I love the middle, but I think the islands could use some more detail.

 

[Mattuki]

Wow!!! It Looks really good! Nice job.

 

[HuracanFTW]

Hello, Huracan here!

There you are again and with another new map this time!
I personaly think this is a good start for a nice map, but as I said "start". It needs some work.
Your islands have a quite flat terraforming, try to make it longer, let it go deeper into the void. By doing this you can add some more details to make it look better.
The map looks a bit empty, try to add some nice fitting elements to improve the gameplay of your map.
I like those custom trees you made, but you only made one and copy/pasted it all around. You can try to make multiple trees and copy those, so the map looks better and not copy/pasted.
You also made just one island to paste it, try to make 2 or maybe 3 islands and use them only 2-3 times so not all the islands look the same.

Anyway, good work so far and I hope you will be editing this one instead of making a new one before even finishing the previous.

Greetings,
Huracan

 

[RynezDev]

It look nice

 

[NitroPelle]

This looks soooooo epic!

 

[MartijnMC]

Hello, Huracan here!

There you are again and with another new map this time!
I personaly think this is a good start for a nice map, but as I said "start". It needs some work.
Your islands have a quite flat terraforming, try to make it longer, let it go deeper into the void. By doing this you can add some more details to make it look better.
The map looks a bit empty, try to add some nice fitting elements to improve the gameplay of your map.
I like those custom trees you made, but you only made one and copy/pasted it all around. You can try to make multiple trees and copy those, so the map looks better and not copy/pasted.
You also made just one island to paste it, try to make 2 or maybe 3 islands and use them only 2-3 times so not all the islands look the same.

Anyway, good work so far and I hope you will be editing this one instead of making a new one before even finishing the previous.

Greetings,
Huracan

I'll work on the terraforming and on the emptyness of the map.
I actually made 6 different spruce trees, but I guess they look a lot like eachother, I'll also work on that.
I'll also make 3 different player-islands, instead of 1.

But.. what do you mean with "I hope you will be editing this one instead of making a new one before even finishing the previous."
Do you mean the Star Wars map? I edited that one but I have no reaction from you on that edited submission yet. Maybe you could check that one out.

 

[Younisco]

Also, an idea that I had was that the perimeter islands should have little "parts" of a track, but if you fly up, it kinda looks like a track (if this made ANY sense xD)

 

[Komodо]

Just a question ; why are the cars in the middle much smaller?

 

[MartijnMC]

Just a question ; why are the cars in the middle much smaller?

Because I wanted to make a track on the middle island, and if I'd use very large cars the middle island would've been huge.

 

[MartijnMC]

Also, an idea that I had was that the perimeter islands should have little "parts" of a track, but if you fly up, it kinda looks like a track (if this made ANY sense xD)

I know what you mean, but I don't think it's possible to make this map like that. Maybe in the future when I create another map I could try that idea out.

 

[Komodо]

@josvu22 ; HuracanFTW bedoelde dat je eerst de StarWars map helemaal 'perfect' moest maken , om daarna pas aan een nieuwe te beginnen , maar nu jij zei dat er nog niemand op gereageerd had , snap ik dat je weer aan een geweldige nieuwe map bent begonnen! (Why in dutch? I didn't know how I had to say this in english :p)

 

[MartijnMC]

@josvu22 ; HuracanFTW bedoelde dat je eerst de StarWars map helemaal 'perfect' moest maken , om daarna pas aan een nieuwe te beginnen , maar nu jij zei dat er nog niemand op gereageerd had , snap ik dat je weer aan een geweldige nieuwe map bent begonnen! (Why in dutch? I didn't know how I had to say this in english :p)

Yeah I want to make my StarWars map 'perfect', but I can't make it better if I don't have any suggestions or feedback to make it better.. Thats why I started making this map

 

[ZiinKz]

Please add this map!!

 

[Mambo Garrix]

You'd better add this! :P

@Efcluke94 @HuracanFTW

 

[Selva6498]

the map is fantastic! It could, instead of building the circuit in the central island, build it all around in the void, it looks much better :D

 

[sasemboy]

nice! +1