Builds Skywars Map: Hog Heaven (WiP, please do not lock thread)

[Deleted member 8554]

The pigs are NOT dead, it is supposed to be like a dream world for pigs.

 

[Deleted member 8554]

And what kind of detail do you mean? Add scars and bruises?

 

[TheAdventurerMM]

You could make the pig organic...

 

[Cherrybless]

Good. but i agree with people who said the pig needs more details >< great job. hope this gets submitted when it's done! :p

 

[Catzore <3 Taco's]

And what kind of detail do you mean? Add scars and bruises?

No >.< add magical stuff

 

[TheAdventurerMM]

You can't detail a pig, but making it organic helps...

 

[Efcluke94]

You can't detail a pig, but making it organic helps...

Do this...

and make the wings more organic, this is an example what I did on an angel warrior a while back:
http://gyazo.com/44ec056dcde702fe451de432af56af79
http://gyazo.com/f67e0ec40bc37b3fa7b353dcda9860e5

Also I origianlly thought the islands had cacti on top, in a desert area, perhaps make the carrots longer/bigger and add more definition.
The pig needs a lot of work , example of organics if you don't know what it is: http://goo.gl/k1PtNy

Finally the cloud, atm its a 1 layer flat surface, this is a cloud: http://gyazo.com/c36207c13978a8c6fec7ce1296075045

That is why I must of locked it last time, if you posted this again.

*This might be harsh, but I'd rather tell you what's wrong with it, than sugar coat it, only way you get better*

 

[Tacosbefriends]

(But yeah, make the pig more fancy :3)

 

[Sophie]

I actually really like this, and i don't understand all the negativity, such as people saying that they won't play it at all. People are forgetting that looks are NOT what makes a map fun; it's the routes, strategy and different various ways to nativate said map that make it good. Size and looks matter not to me at all. Take for example, the pokemon map; the psyduck may look really awesome and pretty, but you're no safer there than you are on, say, the diglett island. Sure, the pig may need a little work due to the fact that those legs look like it has been starved for 2 weeks, but it really isn't a half bad map. The fact that you can choose whether to be ontop of the pig for a better view at a cost of exposure or on the cloud for more defence makes it a much better map than say, taiga, which looks great but isn't at all fun to play on. Keep it up, piggy (^(oo)^)

 

[Cherrybless]

I actually really like this, and i don't understand all the negativity, such as people saying that they won't play it at all. People are forgetting that looks are NOT what makes a map fun; it's the routes, strategy and different various ways to nativate said map that make it good. Size and looks matter not to me at all. Take for example, the pokemon map; the psyduck may look really awesome and pretty, but you're no safer there than you are on, say, the diglett island. Sure, the pig may need a little work due to the fact that those legs look like it has been starved for 2 weeks, but it really isn't a half bad map. The fact that you can choose whether to be ontop of the pig for a better view at a cost of exposure or on the cloud for more defence makes it a much better map than say, taiga, which looks great but isn't at all fun to play on. Keep it up, piggy (^(oo)^)

i agree :D

 

[Younisco]

I like this mal, however its an overuse of wool. Everything is wool. Wool. Wool. Wool. Wool. Wool. :confused:

 

[Sophie]

I like this mal, however its an overuse of wool. Everything is wool. Wool. Wool. Wool. Wool. Wool. :confused:

@Piggygirl120 he has a point; everything being wool is nice, but the fact that wool burns too easily would overpower the pyro kit and the map would be unplayable. You should replace a lot of the wool with stained clay, and maybe have a few islands made of wool. The last thing you want is for the entire map to be burned down and it looking like this;

Yeah.. @sophh_ decided to take the entire pizza spleef map apart :p

 

[Deleted member 8554]

Thread revive XD

 

[Younisco]

Have you added less wool & more clay (or something rather than wool)?

 

[Deleted member 8554]

Yes a little bit

 

[SGTkuzey]

People pretty much said their opinions, if you want to imporve this suggestion then make another thread.