Builds [Solo Sky Wars] Railroads

[_Extreme_Xavier_]

Hello wonderful people! Today I present to you a Solo Sky Wars map which I call Railroads.

Description:

- Amount of players: 12
- Amount chest on starter island: 3
- Amount of chest on the railroad (circle): 8
- Amount of chest on the islands attached to the middle island: 8 (2 on each)
- Amount of chest on the middle island: 8

Screenshots:


Involved Builder's: _Extreme_Xavier_

Let me know if there is anything I should change/add. Knowing me it probably is xD. Feel free to comment any feedback that you can think of. Have a great day!

Edit: I've been reading through all the comments and I completely understand. I knew that there were stuffs that needed to be fixed and now I know exactly what. I will do a lot of changes and once it's done I will upload and updated version of the map. Thanks

 

[Dona SwiftKey 1]

Im sorry But i vote no maybe i can change my mind
So i vote no because the starter islands are just way to simple you should make the trees look better and the chest on the tree is Hard to reach the rail looks good
But the mid is odd looking

 

[miguelitoindus]

Hello wonderful people! Today I present to you a Solo Sky Wars map which I call Railroads.

Description:

- Amount of players: 12
- Amount chest on starter island: 3
- Amount of chest on the railroad (circle): 8
- Amount of chest on the islands attached to the middle island: 8 (2 on each)
- Amount of chest on the middle island: 8

Screenshots:
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Involved Builder's: _Extreme_Xavier_

Let me know if there is anything I should change/add. Knowing me it probably is xD. Feel free to comment any feedback that you can think of. Have a great day!

Awesome stuff! I really love the whole railroad idea, very unique. I would add some more detail to the islands, such as the grass, and also some more detail on the main circle. But I still think it was a cool map, keep at it!

 

[Fesa]

I’m going to vote no for a few reasons.

• The landscape is too simple. It’s all just hills and flat space...
• The diamonds in mid are too OP in basic, I’m als not sure why you have 4 anvils in mid.
• The little tower’s underground room’s stairs to it are boring... no special turn or anything
• The lightning seems a bit odd, with torches placed down just to get light not seeming part of the build.
• The groups of island seem really far away, forcing players to go mid. Which I personally don’t like.

I do really like the thema and the ring around mid. We have something similar in the map rainbow but mid there is just a little “house”. I’d really to see a map with this layout added to CubeCraft! With new spawn island and maybe a better center mid. I’d vote yes I think!
Good luck with building!

~Fesa

 

[melkjong3n]

hey the map looks great but.
I would use fewer standard blocks from now on the middle looks perfect. That's all I have to say, think about that with the next folder you're creating. Other than that, I think it's nice to play on this.

 

[Savvy]

The map looks good but need some more detail added.

1. Starter islands look a little simple and the chest on the tree a lot of players might miss. Also I would either add 4 islands or make the islands surround the mid as a circle rather than 3 per side.
2. The rail track to me looks like it need to be a bit bigger or with detail added.
3. Mid doesn't really match the theme or looks a bit odd. Could possibly make it look like a mine shaft, small cave, etc that will add landscape and terrain to it, and possibly make it look less flat. And the diamonds will be too op if the game is voted basic.
4. And the mid islands with the spiral stairs down to a chest looks weird to me, I rather have it just there or an actual underground shaft.

Other than that the map as a great idea and theme and I hope to see a theme like this in solo skywars. Keep up the good work!

 

[colinverp]

I've voted yes, but I still don't like the islands, the starter islands are too symmetrical, and the ladders could be announcing while passing by. the diamond blocks in the models are a bit too overpowered to my opinion I think that you should change them into ores so there are some diamonds for the crafters. same with the gold blocks. the sub mids are also a bit too small underneath, you can make those rooms bigger. the chest in the tree shouldn't be there. and the middle island, you ban better chance it again. maybe make it like a mine, and go down in the island.

 

[maflenoo]

Brooo. Imagine you play basic and a guy got 4 diamond blocks in the mid.
Sorry, but my answer is NO. There are a lot of reasons to deny this map. At least the 4 diamond blocks and the mid.

 

[marcmq]

At first glance I love this map! I feel like it has so much game play and aesthetic potential. However I feel like the outer islands lack some minor details in the grass (it looks a little plain). I also think that the track on the main circle could be a more interesting block than stone. The texture of the centre island floor is also a bit random and could have more relevant detail to the theme. I don't really know what mid and sub mid islands are meant to be and how they relate to the theme. I'm not saying they aren't relevant but its not clear. I feel like locomotives as the sub mid islands and a station building as mid with a platform around it would be instantly recognisable. Again love the basic design and lots of potential but needs more relevance to the title. If any of my points are picked up I will 100% vote yes,but for now its a no.

 

[Vict0r]

I like it. I would vote "yes".

 

[Lecura]

In my opinion the map is a little basic (grass, trees..) and also less detailed.