Builds [SOLO-SKYWARS] Ruïne

[99th_DutchNubnub]

[SOLO-SKYWARS] Ruïne

finally it is ready .....

with this map I paid attention to:

• Pvp space
• progressing for a quick game
• don't make long bridges
• occasionally parcour
• not too many details

all these things can be found in the photos

how many chests?

• Home Island: 3 chest
• Submid: 5 chests
• Mid: 13 chests

I hope you will appreciate this map and want to play it !!!!

 

[Fqnta]

Ziet er cool uit, maar de torens kunnen wel wat meer contrast gebruiken. Ook denk ikndat het handig is als je het de volgende keer in het engels schrijft zodat ook de niet nederlandse mensen kunnen beslissen of ze de map willen of niet.

 

[ShinyArrow]

Sorry it's a no for me,

I really like the idea of the map, but I think there are some few things that can be changed to get a better map. I am not a experienced builder, but I will try to give some feedback.

First the ground in mid is too flat, there are no details, only grass, dirt and stone. It will look much better if it has some details like you did on the sub-mid islands with the stairs.

Also I think the towers in mid are not detailed enough, maybe you can use stairs/slabs/fences to make the towers more interesting.

Spoiler: Example

https://21o46w37sxh01isto02hpxfl-wpengine.netdna-ssl.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/10/mcma03-250x250.png

With some improvement I would really like to play on this map!

 

[zSeann]

It looks cool, but I think you can get more details done.

 

[YeaUhm]

Hey!

It’s a cool looking theme. However, I feel like the outside of the castle towers are too boring. Try to add some more detail to that (Example: Mix the walls of the towers with more different types of stone) that would make it look way better already. You can also give the the whole mid Island more detail, as the details seem very low/ non-existing

Also, I feel like the map is too big. This can just be me but I think it should be a little bit smaller.

This I just my opinion, I hope you can Improve you build by these tips.

I’d like to see a re-submission once it’s improved.
-Have a wonderful day and stay safe!

 

[99th_DutchNubnub]

Ziet er cool uit, maar de torens kunnen wel wat meer contrast gebruiken. Ook denk ikndat het handig is als je het de volgende keer in het engels schrijft zodat ook de niet nederlandse mensen kunnen beslissen of ze de map willen of niet.

If it's okay, I've changed that.

 

[Mqrre]

Looking good ;)

 

[Jiivan]

It looks good, but with improvement it can be a lot more. Good work.

 

[99th_DutchNubnub]

i hope this is better?

 

[Savvy]

Me like, but needs a lot more detail. Try using something else rather than stone and coblestone. Peraps wood in the towers or something else to give it the wow factor.

 

[itrieditathome]

[SOLO-SKYWARS] Ruïne

finally it is ready .....

with this map I paid attention to:

• Pvp space
• progressing for a quick game
• don't make long bridges
• occasionally parcour
• not too many details

all these things can be found in the photos

how many chests?

• Home Island: 3 chest
• Submid: 5 chests
• Mid: 13 chests

I hope you will appreciate this map and want to play it !!!!

Yes pls, would love to play on this map

 

[Ihateflyhackerspweaseban]

I think a problem is the size, solo maps are usually small.

 

[Surfing Duck]

It is a cool map, but you could add more details to the ground and castle at mid

 

[Joggg]

Ziet er inderdaad goed uit, Misschien wat om over een paar maandjes is te gaan solliciteren voor Designer?

 

[melkjong3n]

The world looks good only the middle is a little too flat and the castle looks a bit straight so make some variation in that next time. For the rest of the good world. goodjob +1

 

[wxzzrd]

I like it it’s just a bit boring +1 but try to make it more interest

 

[Ferrcho]

The map is very good, but I think CubeCraft, doesn't look for this kind of maps, and besides it looks a lot like Hypixel's maps, I don't think they'll accept it.

Me and 2 friends were denied a map because of this.

But good job.

 

[Deleted member 469419]

It looks quite good to me, but you'd need to do some improvements if you do really want this get accepted.

First of all you should replace the whole floor of the mid to a only one, I mean, you mix some blocks like (dirt and grass), you should replace it all to grass.


Also, I think that the main islands would need to be a bit close to the mid. That are my feedback, actually nothing more to add!

Good map though! ^^

 

[Skqrrt]

Yes looks cool!!

 

[Salty_Shadows]

Just add detail to it and it would make it much better