Builds Started working on a map

[ShyRazu]

Just want some feedback and ideas you have that I could add. Only built a single island here (which will be the same for the remaining teams). I'm looking for ideas for the middle :)

The name would be something around ''Cloud'' or near that.
Don't mind the island in the back. I was trying something out.

Let me remind you, if any of you knows Grian (a youtuber), I took the base model of the house on the cloud to then will be building the rest of the islands and middle. Might end up looking great.
https://www.youtube.com/user/Xelqua

1. EDIT
I'd say the name is decided. This map will be called cloud

Here are some pictures;

Spoiler: First Island

After building the first island, I decided to finish the map as fast as I could so you guys can give me ideas and suggestions faster.
Here's the pictures;

Spoiler: Finished Map (No Edit)

 

[DocMenios]

Just want some feedback and ideas you have that I could add. Only built a single island here (which will be the same for the remaining teams). I'm looking for ideas for the middle :)

View attachment 129171
View attachment 129172
View attachment 129173
View attachment 129174
View attachment 129175
View attachment 129176
View attachment 129177

The name would be something around ''Cloud'' or near that.
Don't mind the island in the back. I was trying something out.

the islands are very great , so low the distances between the islands ( advice for the rest of the map construction ) and finish the map , can't wait to see this finished :)

 

[ShyRazu]

the islands are very great , so low the distances between the islands ( advice for the rest of the map construction ) and finish the map , can't wait to see this finished :)

Finished it. I did it pretty fast so not everything is perfect ^^ Looking forward for suggestions :)

 

[SuperT]

You just built this,

 

[ShyRazu]

You just built this,

Let me remind you, if any of you knows Grian (a youtuber), I took the base model of the house on the cloud to then will be building the rest of the islands and middle. Might end up looking great.
https://www.youtube.com/user/Xelqua

That's why I said that. No need to re-post something I've already mentionned haha ^^

 

[SuperT]

That's why I said that. No need to re-post something I've already mentionned haha ^^

oh im stupid lol sorry

 

[ShyRazu]

oh im stupid lol sorry

It's all good buddy ^^

 

[Zombiepower]

@Yoya @TeovoTeovo give him some feedback

 

[Yamin]

Cubecraft wants to use original and 'self-build' maps. I think using a build from youtube won't help getting this map accepted.
I really like the theme though.
The middle island and the player island do not really match that much so maybe you have to rethink that out.
The lay-out looks cool, but the builds look a little bit simple in my opinion.
I would saykeep improving it!
Well done!

 

[DestructionMaker]

Maybe more decoration?And try to change the house a little bit here and there.:rolleyes:

 

[JerrySox]

Note: This is for map submissions not asking for some ideas for your map. ;)

 

[zSem_]

@Yoya @TeovoTeovo give him some feedback

sorry but why should a builder give some feedback to someone who ''re-build'' something from YouTube?
it isnt his build (it is cool btw :)) but yeahh... you know what I mean?

 

[Zombiepower]

sorry but why should a builder give some feedback to someone who ''re-build'' something from YouTube?
it isnt his build (it is cool btw :)) but yeahh... you know what I mean?

Didn't knew it sorry , Thx for noticing me !

 

[Fristey]

Like it good work man.. make some more great maps :)

 

[zSem_]

Didn't knew it sorry , Thx for noticing me !

Your welcome;)