Builds [Team Egg Wars] Dinner

[Mivke]

Yes please! an amazing rush map i would love to see this ingame

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

Well for people who voted no and said nothing any suggestions on how to make it better?

 

[remio]

No offense but am I the only one who thinks the map is actually a little ugly? The chairs don't look nice at all and the middle island is actually just Tea Party but a little different, meaning that I don't think it's original at all. I mean, it's like Lucky Islands' Christmas(? not sure) map combined with Tea Party. It also misses a lot of details and most of the details you added don't look that good in my opinion. The map looks very empty and boring. I'm sorry, but you've made better creations.

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

No offense but am I the only one who thinks the map is actually a little ugly? The chairs don't look nice at all and the middle island is actually just Tea Party but a little different, meaning that I don't think it's original at all. I mean, it's like Lucky Islands' Christmas(? not sure) map combined with Tea Party. It also misses a lot of details and most of the details you added don't look that good in my opinion. The map looks very empty and boring. I'm sorry, but you've made better creations.

Again, can you give me suggestions to improve it rather than focusing on dissing the map? Also it is original? Are you saying I copied it?

 

[remio]

Again, can you give me suggestions to improve it rather then dissing the map? Is that so hard?

Dissing? Excuse me but I'm giving my honest opinion on the map. Also I've mentioned a couple if points where it could be improved, such as the designs, the chairs and the empty space that needs to be filled up.

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

Dissing? Excuse me but I'm giving my honest opinion on the map. Also I've mentioned a couple if points where it could be improved, such as the designs, the chairs and the empty space that needs to be filled up.

You said I practically copied tea party and called it ugly. And ok, but that’s pretty vague. I’ll have updates on the map soon enough.

 

[Mivke]

ugly maps doesnt care do they? Look creek in team lucky islands its just stone and dirt. Doctor, amazing map i love it!

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

ugly maps doesnt care do they? Look creek in team lucky islands its just stone and dirt. Doctor, amazing map i love it!

I mean he is not wrong it can use work but I wouldn’t call it ugly.

 

[Mivke]

I mean he is not wrong it can use work but I wouldn’t call it ugly.

i mean basic not ugly xD

 

[Andyyy]

I mean he is not wrong it can use work but I wouldn’t call it ugly.

Then why did you submit it?

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

Then why did you submit it?

I thought it was good but I didn’t realize people would not like it.

 

[Mivke]

I though it was good but I didn’t realize people would have such a problem with it.

they only dont like it bc it has basic design and its a rush map ;)

 

[remio]

You just said I practically copied tea party and called it ugly. And ok but that’s pretty vague. I’ll have updates on the map soon enough.

(but smaller and imo not as great)
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But less detailed and in my opinion not as good as the others. This is not CubeCraft-themed. I've said this before but if you see a CubeCraft map it has that kind of touch that instantly reminds me of this server. This map could just be on any server.

they only dont like it bc it has basic design and its a rush map ;)

Sorry for having a different opinion but could you please not put words in my mouth I didn't say?

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

(but smaller and imo not as great)
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But less detailed and in my opinion not as good as the others. This is not CubeCraft-themed. I've said this before but if you see a CubeCraft map it has that kind of touch that instantly reminds me of this server. This map could just be on any server.

Sorry for having a different opinion but could you please not put words in my mouth I didn't say?

Again I see no resemblance whatsoever. But why do you keep going on and on about how bad it is? I get it, it’s not perfect. I’m trying to fix it.

 

[remio]

Again I see no resemblance whatsoever. So how did I copy it? Also why do you keep going on and on about how bad it is? I get it, it’s not perfect. I’m trying to fix it. But it’s a little hard when all I hear is it sucks.

Where did I say you copied it? I only said it looks like a bad combination of Tea Party and the other map on the picture. I believe we gave enough points for you to work on, so I don't really understand why you say "But it’s a little hard when all I hear is it sucks." while I gave my honest opinion with fixes like you asked here:

Well for people who voted no and said absolutely nothing any suggestions on how to make it better?

 

[Sweetenerera]

I tried making a good, well written response, going over everything I don't like about your map but it boils down to three words: Lack of detail.

There are plenty of chair and table maps and they all look stunning, fillt with details in every part of the map. Every block feels right. But your map just feels wrong. It feels like a map a new server, with no players, no building skills, no money to pay builders, downloads off the internet because it was the first result and they don't know how to download CubeCraft and Hypixel maps, good maps.

There is not enough detail. Looking at a Dinner: There are details everywhere. Bottom, top, right side, left side, back.

Instead of writing paragraphs on every thing I dislike, I'm just going to make a list with the things that lack detail and then a list of reasons why I still think it shouldn't be added.

Parts that lack detail / have weird looking details:
- Back of the chair
- Top of the chair
- Armrest
- Sitting area of the chair (add like, a cushion?)
- Legs of the chair
- Legs of the table
- Tablecloth
- Plates on the table
- Fire

"Oh HeY buT tHaT's EvEryThiNg!!1!$*÷!"
Yeah I know..

Parts that just need to change:
- Back of the chair.. It looks like it's been glued on top but not properly. It doesn't look like it's a part of it.
- Generator under the table.. There's a reason the middle wool part in Tea Party got removed, camping. Imagine camping here with a bow..

Reasons I still disagree with adding this map:
- Tea Party, Dinner (SW), X-Mas Party, Feast, Dinner (LI)... those are all the chair and table maps.. yeah that's quite a lot. There are two chair maps for LI and EW. In both cases, one is a seasonal map. However, if this map gets added there would be three EggWars chair maps, which is too much. I'd become repetitive, boring.
- It's a Team EggWars map.. but it's 4v4 instead of 10v10.. This is way too much of a rush map. It'd be impossible to win because of tryhards. I'm fine with Feast, because it's a temporary map. But you can clearly see in Feast the amount of rushers there are.. It's a quick and easy win. People will just farm wins on this map.


Right now this is not a CubeCraft worthy map and you're kinda insulting yourself with submitting this. You're a pretty good builder but this is just.. nowhere near your previous maps........ not counting Blossom........

Well for people who voted no and said absolutely nothing any suggestions on how to make it better?

Speaking about Blossom!
You're asking for people their opinion and suggestions from the people who voted no. I did this with Blossom. I gave my opinion in a well written, well explained and respectful way. You didn't reply, you didn't even give it a simple like to show you've read it. Why should we write essays explaining in great detail how you can fix your map when you can't even be bothered to acknowledge the existence of the post?
Don't expect more posts giving my opinion and suggestions if you don't even bothering acknowledging my posts.

 

[Deleted member 481668]

The table are really nice done, I really like this map! It looks a little bit simple for some people but for me it looks really difficult to make and its really nice! Keep going with building I like it! <3

 

[Shomita]

This has to be added please, 10/10.

 

[Shomita]

[QUOTE = "Mivkeee, publicación: 1091802, miembro: 442753"] solo no les gusta porque tiene un diseño básico y es un mapa ;)rápido [/ QUOTE]

Hello everyone! Today I have another map that definitely won't get deleted unlike the last one. :|
Please enjoy! <3

https://imgur.com/a/YZll6xs

-Map Name: Dinner

-Creator(s): @_The13thDoctor_

- Description of map:
-Starting Island: 2 Iron Gens (Level 3) 1 Gold Gen (Broken)
-Above Middle: (2 Gold Gens (Level 3) 2 Iron Gens (Level 4)
-Below Middle: (1 Gold Gen (Level 3) 1 Iron Gen (Level 4)

Dinner is a rush map, but a very unique and special one. It only holds 4 to a team and a total of 8 players allowing for fast and intense gameplay, other changes making it less campy and more fast pace is the removal of all diamond gens, as well as having to go to mid for gold, furthermore with 2 layers of middle allows for new strategies for playing on this map, before you get upset about the underneath the table part I have taken very much care into preventing players from camping under it. ;) Furthermore, a build height limit can be put into play to prevent any camping anywhere on the map. This map is also different as it allows for smaller parties, less chance for randoms to join your team, can even be used for hosting a mini-tournament if you wanted, a lot of the community wants maps like these while some don't. I can understand why but this map might be your cup of coffee.

Your feedback is very much appreciated! Good or bad I'd like to hear it! Please, however, vote based on how much you like the map gameplay and style-wise, keep in mind this is going to be a map for everyone so don't vote if you want to be a troll or you don't like me.

Special Thanks:
@Nutuu for helping me fix some coloring issues.
@Gatsbe and @Robbedz for giving tips and help.
@Efcluke94 for discussing this concept with me and if I were allowed to make a map like this.
Anyone else who gave tips and suggestions for this!

The only problem I could see is that they will surely hide under the table or behind the chairs, but I think that on any map you can hide, so everything is normal, I like it and I hope it is added.

 

[Bacup_GM]

it's a good map but it's not good 4vs4 the best thing would be 4vs4vs4vs4
it would be a more interesting
and if you add a 4vs4vs4vs4 you would have to move the middle islands a little further and add something before reaching the middle
;)