Builds [TEAM EGGWARS] Infected

[BsA07]

• Description of map:
This map is a 4 player team eggwars map that has a total of 32 players (8 teams).

Spawn island:
- 1 Iron generator level 2
- 1 Iron generator level 1
- 1 Gold generator level 1
- 1 Diamond generator broken

Sub-middle island:
- 2 Iron generator level 2
- 2 gold generator level 3
- 2 dia generator level 1

Middle:
- 8 Gold generator level 2
- 2 Diamond generator level 2
- 1 emerald generator level 1

- creator(s): @BsA07 Helping creating: @Quistekop @SuperSebassie

• Some pictures:

 

[Onik]

I love this map but imo, the only issues that come across my mind with this map is that the map layout/arrangement feels a bit too massively spread out. My best suggestion, as to what could maybe be done to improve this map on its own would be, to follow the same layout as the current map "food", by placing the sub-mids on diagonals from the main islands, that way you can bring in the main islands a tiny little bit closer. As for the designs from each island, it feels like it keeps degrading or becoming less textured as you go from your main island to mid, at the current moment the main mid looks a bit too basic.

 

[BsA07]

I love this map but imo, the only issues that come across my mind with this map is that the map layout/arrangement feels a bit too massively spread out. My best suggestion, as to what could maybe be done to improve this map on its own would be, to follow the same layout as the current map "food", by placing the sub-mids on diagonals from the main islands, that way you can bring in the main islands a tiny little bit closer. As for the designs from each island, it feels like it keeps degrading or becoming less textured as you go from your main island to mid, at the current moment the main mid looks a bit too basic.

Thx for your reaction! i wil work at it if i make my next map!

 

[Diav]

I like the idea and the concept of this map but you could improve this a lot, and a when I say a lot I mean A LOT.

The spawn islands: They look very confusing and they are very noisy. The street: it is weird, cars can go just in one direction, this would be ok but you put a white line in the middle and usually one way roads doesn't have it, so, or you remove the white line or you make the road larger (You also used black concrete powder and white concrete powder, which can't be used in the server since they're 1.12 blocks). The structures: They are just stone squares with random blocks placed around, and also there are some structures there are supported by wooden logs, I don't know what you wanted to do, it's not realistic. So my tip is to try to build realistic factories instead of placing stone squares (search for references on google, every builder does that). Above the structures you placed white wool blocks, I really don't get what you wanted to do, to me it just looks like blocks placed completly randomly. Maybe you wanted to make a smoke? If so you should use cobwebs or even better glass (panels and blocks), with a gradient that goes from light gray to dark gray/black. The trees: They don't have a realistic shape, as I told you before search for some references on google and try to rebuild it in game. Also instead of using those kind of logs, use id 17:13 (if it's spruce) or id 162:13 (if it's dark oak), these are blocks that look better for trees, try it out. Personally when I'm building trees I make the shape using diamond blocks (id 57), they help me to figure out how the shape is better than how logs would do, obviously when I reach the right shape I replace them. The flag: the flag's stick is larger than the flag it self, I think it's kinda obvious that it isn't realistic, make the stick thinner and give the flag a smoother shape. The coloring of the terrain: Please, everybody, don't use //replace to color a terrain, it looks so chaotic and confusing. I advise you to use Go Paint and use splatter and spray brushes, they are the best for coloring the terrain. Obviosuly this goes also for the sub-middle islands and the middle island.

The sub-middle island: it is just an empty round structure. Try to give it a more interesting shape and add some interiors, not too many details or it'd affect the pvping in a bad way. The colors are weird weird as well. There are also 2 diamond generators, 2 iron generators and 2 golden generators, anybody could just kill the team next to them and camp there and get more diamonds than going to middle, it's too overpowered. I'd suggest you to remove at least 1 diamond generator, 1 golden generator and 1 iron generator, maybe even both.

The middle island: it's just... flat and empty. There is barely anything. I think they should be nuclear reactors(???) but their shape is very strange, I thought the one in the middle was a huge bucket. I'd suggest you to fix their shape and to add something, maybe add more parts of the factory.

As I said before I really like your idea but the map needs to be improved, it isn't enough for cubecraft levels right now.

For now it is a no for me, let's see if you update it how it comes out. I love the fact that you spent time building a map, don't give up. If you keep building and practising you can reach very high levels, remember that all the good builders have spent a lot of time to learn what they know and what they can do, just keep putting effort in what you do and results will come soon. Good luck :)

 

[Kazwa]

I think that the map look good, I don't know what a good eggwars map should contain but I think the theme is cool and I like the design. The only bad thing I find design wise is that the spawn islands are a little confusing as Diav mentioned.

 

[BsA07]

I like the idea and the concept of this map but you could improve this a lot, and a when I say a lot I mean A LOT.

The spawn islands: They look very confusing and they are very noisy. The street: it is weird, cars can go just in one direction, this would be ok but you put a white line in the middle and usually one way roads doesn't have it, so, or you remove the white line or you make the road larger (You also used black concrete powder and white concrete powder, which can't be used in the server since they're 1.12 blocks). The structures: They are just stone squares with random blocks placed around, and also there are some structures there are supported by wooden logs, I don't know what you wanted to do, it's not realistic. So my tip is to try to build realistic factories instead of placing stone squares (search for references on google, every builder does that). Above the structures you placed white wool blocks, I really don't get what you wanted to do, to me it just looks like blocks placed completly randomly. Maybe you wanted to make a smoke? If so you should use cobwebs or even better glass (panels and blocks), with a gradient that goes from light gray to dark gray/black. The trees: They don't have a realistic shape, as I told you before search for some references on google and try to rebuild it in game. Also instead of using those kind of logs, use id 17:13 (if it's spruce) or id 162:13 (if it's dark oak), these are blocks that look better for trees, try it out. Personally when I'm building trees I make the shape using diamond blocks (id 57), they help me to figure out how the shape is better than how logs would do, obviously when I reach the right shape I replace them. The flag: the flag's stick is larger than the flag it self, I think it's kinda obvious that it isn't realistic, make the stick thinner and give the flag a smoother shape. The coloring of the terrain: Please, everybody, don't use //replace to color a terrain, it looks so chaotic and confusing. I advise you to use Go Paint and use splatter and spray brushes, they are the best for coloring the terrain. Obviosuly this goes also for the sub-middle islands and the middle island.

The sub-middle island: it is just an empty round structure. Try to give it a more interesting shape and add some interiors, not too many details or it'd affect the pvping in a bad way. The colors are weird weird as well. There are also 2 diamond generators, 2 iron generators and 2 golden generators, anybody could just kill the team next to them and camp there and get more diamonds than going to middle, it's too overpowered. I'd suggest you to remove at least 1 diamond generator, 1 golden generator and 1 iron generator, maybe even both.

The middle island: it's just... flat and empty. There is barely anything. I think they should be nuclear reactors(???) but their shape is very strange, I thought the one in the middle was a huge bucket. I'd suggest you to fix their shape and to add something, maybe add more parts of the factory.

As I said before I really like your idea but the map needs to be improved, it isn't enough for cubecraft levels right now.

For now it is a no for me, let's see if you update it how it comes out. I love the fact that you spent time building a map, don't give up. If you keep building and practising you can reach very high levels, remember that all the good builders have spent a lot of time to learn what they know and what they can do, just keep putting effort in what you do and results will come soon. Good luck :)

Thx for your reaction! in the middle island, that was a dna cell, with a labaraorium.

 

[BsA07]

I think that the map look good, I don't know what a good eggwars map should contain but I think the theme is cool and I like the design. The only bad thing I find design wise is that the spawn islands are a little confusing as Diav mentioned.

the white whool on the island was a skelet with a arrow in his head, i forget take pictures of that.

 

[Entrustious6679]

This looks great. Maybe you could add something to the middle as its fairly empty? Apart from that, it looks reasonable for a map. I don’t specialise in the egg wars too much so I couldn’t say much more :)

 

[BsA07]

I like the idea and the concept of this map but you could improve this a lot, and a when I say a lot I mean A LOT.

The spawn islands: They look very confusing and they are very noisy. The street: it is weird, cars can go just in one direction, this would be ok but you put a white line in the middle and usually one way roads doesn't have it, so, or you remove the white line or you make the road larger (You also used black concrete powder and white concrete powder, which can't be used in the server since they're 1.12 blocks). The structures: They are just stone squares with random blocks placed around, and also there are some structures there are supported by wooden logs, I don't know what you wanted to do, it's not realistic. So my tip is to try to build realistic factories instead of placing stone squares (search for references on google, every builder does that). Above the structures you placed white wool blocks, I really don't get what you wanted to do, to me it just looks like blocks placed completly randomly. Maybe you wanted to make a smoke? If so you should use cobwebs or even better glass (panels and blocks), with a gradient that goes from light gray to dark gray/black. The trees: They don't have a realistic shape, as I told you before search for some references on google and try to rebuild it in game. Also instead of using those kind of logs, use id 17:13 (if it's spruce) or id 162:13 (if it's dark oak), these are blocks that look better for trees, try it out. Personally when I'm building trees I make the shape using diamond blocks (id 57), they help me to figure out how the shape is better than how logs would do, obviously when I reach the right shape I replace them. The flag: the flag's stick is larger than the flag it self, I think it's kinda obvious that it isn't realistic, make the stick thinner and give the flag a smoother shape. The coloring of the terrain: Please, everybody, don't use //replace to color a terrain, it looks so chaotic and confusing. I advise you to use Go Paint and use splatter and spray brushes, they are the best for coloring the terrain. Obviosuly this goes also for the sub-middle islands and the middle island.

The sub-middle island: it is just an empty round structure. Try to give it a more interesting shape and add some interiors, not too many details or it'd affect the pvping in a bad way. The colors are weird weird as well. There are also 2 diamond generators, 2 iron generators and 2 golden generators, anybody could just kill the team next to them and camp there and get more diamonds than going to middle, it's too overpowered. I'd suggest you to remove at least 1 diamond generator, 1 golden generator and 1 iron generator, maybe even both.

The middle island: it's just... flat and empty. There is barely anything. I think they should be nuclear reactors(???) but their shape is very strange, I thought the one in the middle was a huge bucket. I'd suggest you to fix their shape and to add something, maybe add more parts of the factory.

As I said before I really like your idea but the map needs to be improved, it isn't enough for cubecraft levels right now.

For now it is a no for me, let's see if you update it how it comes out. I love the fact that you spent time building a map, don't give up. If you keep building and practising you can reach very high levels, remember that all the good builders have spent a lot of time to learn what they know and what they can do, just keep putting effort in what you do and results will come soon. Good luck :)

the white whool on the island was a skelet with a arrow in his head, i forget take pictures of that.

 

[BsA07]

This looks great. Maybe you could add something to the middle as its fairly empty? Apart from that, it looks reasonable for a map. I don’t specialise in the egg wars too much so I couldn’t say much more :)

thank you! i wanted to added some more in the midd,
but i didn't know what

 

[Entrustious6679]

thank you! i wanted to added some more in the midd,
but i didn't know what

No problem! Maybe just something surrounding the laboratory?

 

[BsA07]

No problem! Maybe just something surrounding the laboratory?

sugestions?

 

[Entrustious6679]

sugestions?

You could maybe alter the shape of the structure and add maybe like a crator in the ground or a few smaller surrounding structures?

 

[melkjong3n]

I love this map but imo, the only issues that come across my mind with this map is that the map layout/arrangement feels a bit too massively spread out. My best suggestion, as to what could maybe be done to improve this map on its own would be, to follow the same layout as the current map "food", by placing the sub-mids on diagonals from the main islands, that way you can bring in the main islands a tiny little bit closer. As for the designs from each island, it feels like it keeps degrading or becoming less textured as you go from your main island to mid, at the current moment the main mid looks a bit too basic.

thanks for your commend we will work on it in the next map !!

 

[henryk]

I think it looks great! The only thing I think could be improved (as others have already said) are the spawn islands, but other than that it seems good :)

 

[ValeHundred]

well ... I think you just copy my introduction, I mean, that's fine, but maybe you can get creative and not copy other people's stuff

but nice map! :D

 

[Pxstrulo_]

+1

 

[BsA07]

well ... I think you just copy my introduction, I mean, that's fine, but maybe you can get creative and not copy other people's stuff

but nice map! :D

im sorry, i think your a good builder, maybe you want to build a map together?

 

[ValeHundred]

im sorry, i think your a good builder, maybe you want to build a map together?

its okay, maybe idk haha im a little bit busy right now

 

[BsA07]

its okay, maybe idk haha im a little bit busy right now

ok, :(