Builds Twister - EggWars Map Submission

[Kachigga Builds]

My friends and I have been playing EggWars on CubeCraft for a while now, and we wanted to create our own map that could possibly be implemented into CubeCraft. The theme of the map is a 'Twister' that ran strait into the side of a barn on a farm. We have looked at the other EggWars maps, and comments for other submitted maps to try to include everything that others have not. This is our first try at making a map for EggWars, and my friends and I (Kachigga, OrphanDephiler, Lethalfireking, and xXShadowDoctorXx) built it.
The map is designed for 6 teams of 2, with 2 iron generators, 1 gold generator, and 1 diamond generator on each map, and should be a medium length game. The center island has two diamond generators, 2 gold generators, and 3 iron generators.
The recommended time of day is 6:30PM (12500) while it is raining (allows for cool effect while nearing the twister itself).
Please feel free to give us feedback on anything that will make the map itself better, as we want the map to be the best it can be.

Here are a few pictures of the map:

 

[GeorgeYb]

I love it great design seem big enough to be 6 teams of 3 though

 

[Younisco]

Would be a lot more suitable if you called it "Windmill" :p, otherwise I like it a lot!

 

[byanTraXx]

It looks like a farm or something like that anyway I like it too.

 

[Unfearful]

I love how you created it! And the twister in the center looks awesome! Well done

 

[iLoveYouu]

Looks awesome, would love to see it and play it on egg wars!

 

[Kachigga Builds]

Would be a lot more suitable if you called it "Windmill" :p, otherwise I like it a lot!

s like a farm or something like that anyway I like it too.

Thank you, and the name of the map can be changed, im just not sure exactly what the best name for it would be.

I love how you created it! And the twister in the center looks awesome! Well done

Thank you very much! We spent a lot of time on trying to get the twister to look perfect!

 

[GeorgeYb]

@Efcluke94 check this out

 

[Kachigga Builds]

@Terrarialover11
@Driii
@HuracanFTW
@MaxvD
@Alex_de_Grote

Please Check this out also.

 

[PinkSparkleWolf]

This looks so great! I luv it :3

 

[Terrarialover11]

It's a pretty good map, much better than most submissions in my opinion, but it didn't really wow me when I saw it. I like the tornado, as well as the theme, but there are a few things I would add and change. First of all, would be the roofs of the barn in the center. It consist of one block and has a pretty simple design, I usually like to add all I can to roofs since they usually look so plain. This also applies to the roofs of the windmills, they are just stairs, which I would never use for a roof (alone at least). Next would be the open space, there is quite a lot of it on the islands, I would use some trees to fill it up. Next up would be the walls, they are for the most part flat. You need to make sure walls have depth, you did add a bit to the barn, but a lot more could be added. Just make sure you do it well and don't end up over detailing it. This next thing is just something I think would be pretty cool, but might take a while. I would add storm clouds around the tornado, they could be shooting out lightning or something like that. Overall this is a pretty nice map, it just needs a few things that I'm sure you can do. Just keep working on it and I'm sure it could come out even better.

 

[_ItzAngelPvP]

GOOD MAP!
WRONG NAME!

You can change the name like "Windmill" <3

 

[Kachigga Builds]

It's a pretty good map, much better than most submissions in my opinion, but it didn't really wow me when I saw it. I like the tornado, as well as the theme, but there are a few things I would add and change. First of all, would be the roofs of the barn in the center. It consist of one block and has a pretty simple design, I usually like to add all I can to roofs since they usually look so plain. This also applies to the roofs of the windmills, they are just stairs, which I would never use for a roof (alone at least). Next would be the open space, there is quite a lot of it on the islands, I would use some trees to fill it up. Next up would be the walls, they are for the most part flat. You need to make sure walls have depth, you did add a bit to the barn, but a lot more could be added. Just make sure you do it well and don't end up over detailing it. This next thing is just something I think would be pretty cool, but might take a while. I would add storm clouds around the tornado, they could be shooting out lightning or something like that. Overall this is a pretty nice map, it just needs a few things that I'm sure you can do. Just keep working on it and I'm sure it could come out even better.

Thanks for letting me know on stuff i can make better! I am going to try to get all those things done, and once i do, should i change my orginal post, make a new thread, or just post it in the comments?

 

[Terrarialover11]

Thanks for letting me know on stuff i can make better! I am going to try to get all those things done, and once i do, should i change my orginal post, make a new thread, or just post it in the comments?

It's up to you, sometimes people like to make a new thread and label it "V.2" But some post it on the original submission.

 

[Alex_de_Grote]

cool windmill design. and yea cool map :)

 

[Sean OConnor]

Cool Map Design. I would totally play on this map, the roofs just need some work.

 

[Dan:]

I love it

I love it great design seem big enough to be 6 teams of 3 though

Agreed, and there really needs to be more 3 team maps, there's only one atm i think

 

[ALEX_CY]

I made a map for egg wars too! Can you check it?

 

[xMegaGamerx]

Good map, I think it looks a bit like the Team Skywars map Farm

 

[OrphanGuy]

Hey it is one of the makers of the map and we have been hard at work and we are wondering if we should make the glass spawn points a branch of lightning coming from the sky @Terrarialover11