Builds Bridge Map(Roman)

[Wave Master7S]

Hello guys today I’ve just barely squeezed in a map.I finished my last two games and so now it’s map time.
Roman
Builder- just me
End portal represents pit.Roman is a map based of the Roman Empire.It has a arch with trees and a palace on a hill.

 

[axinater]

I really like this suggestion and the theme is really nice. This is amazing work as you were the only builder on the project. I would definitely like to see this added.

 

[Priley]

Hey, I've added a poll as this is mandatory for map submissions :)

It's a cool, simple map. Perhaps the pit should be more integrated into the map instead of it looking like a separate element that was just plopped on top at the end?

 

[Wave Master7S]

Hey, I've added a poll as this is mandatory for map submissions :)

It's a cool, simple map. Perhaps the pit should be more integrated into the map instead of it looking like a separate element that was just plopped on top at the end?

I forgot it because I was about to go to sleep thanks.

 

[Egg🥚]

Cool map!

 

[TrueMike]

It's really nice, good job!

 

[7fishy7]

looks really good, hope to see it added to both java and bedrock.

 

[Wave Master7S]

I made this on bedrock but might work on java

 

[FnigePython]

Arguably the best map ive seen from you. Well done

 

[Blue Flam]

Yeeees add it!! It's awesome! You're a master, master.

 

[_EliteRaspberry]

Hey, so there is a few things i don't like 100% of this map, i really love the theme, but these are some changes i would make for example:

- Remove the front "gate" structure. This just mainly is in the way if somebody feels like playing the bow, if you rush on the ground and try to go around their spawn or if you try to bridge above. This will just be always in a way to allow smooth gameplay.
- Integrate the portal more into the mountain/tempel structure. Atm it is just standing really out of place in the middle and will be hard to defend because you dont have the typical ladder back rush and stairs rush to the sides
- Remove the trees island and integrate it into the original island. The trees island is just a perfect opportunity for camping and bowspamming from the sides and will allow players to just cause alot of time hiding there. The tree looks awesome but i would then rather try to put it at a side on the main island (maybe a bit in the back) so the player sees it as a nice detail but doesn't come too much into contact with it
- Change the Tempels iron layout. Atm you integrated the iron in the floor, but it would be more useful if you made piles of iron. So that if it gets all mined there is a smooth and flat ground to technically pvp on and not a uneven floor with holes

Thats about all the stuff that i did not agree with from the screenshots. I still think this map has a awesome theme, but i would like it more with those additions!

 

[Wave Master7S]

Bump

 

[Wave Master7S]

LAST bump because I wanna see more opinions.

 

[_The13thDoctor_]

Bump

In case you did not know, bumps are not needed because map submissions can never be locked unless they are either accepted or rejected. People if they want, can reply and weigh in until it is closed. (:

As for the map, it looks decent, however, some of the changes mentioned by @_EliteRaspberry should be made before I vote yes.

 

[Soulless_Unity]

Hello, thank you for your efforts in submitting this.

Unfortunately, collectively the design team have decided to deny this map submission due to the following reasons:
-Building Structure quality
-Starting island layout

Please do not be disheartened by the above message. Really hope you had fun through the building process!