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Gogbe

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So me and my friends (The_C0de_Master and Moommooy) Love tower defense so much that we decided to make a map for it! So here it is code named "The End Forest". In the development process we made a nine out of the road!
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The finished product!
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Well thats the map! Hope it works!
 

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Um.. Yea... I feel like I shouldn't comment on this, but this is pretty much borderline terrible. You literally left giant spheres everywhere. Spammed the new chorus fruit down and made a purpur block path. This is like... just.. I'll leave it at that.
 

Gogbe

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Um.. Yea... I feel like I shouldn't comment on this, but this is pretty much borderline terrible. You literally left giant spheres everywhere. Spammed the new chorus fruit down and made a purpur block path. This is like... just.. I'll leave it at that.
Well... Thanks for the honesty atleast.
 

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I sort of feel bad about my last post considering you most likely spent quite a bit of time on it. So I'm going to give you suggestions rather than putting the chorus fruit EVERYWHERE remove it and make some cool creations with them, be creative.. Also what else is in the end? The dragon, if you know how to make one.. By all means that would make this 10x's cooler. Also the end towers. Rather than going for the typical just cylinder make your own tower use your imagination, rather then basically just copying concepts and placing them on a map, in this case you copied just vanilla minecraft.
 
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@Undead summed up:
First glance = terribly honest > Some thought a few mins later = Apologetic and offers advice

Regarding the map.. what Undead said. Good luck and I'm glad you're liking TD at least. :)
 

The_C0de_Master

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btw if you give credits for this map its moommooy not Moommooy, minecraft is very case sensitive. We spent a lot of time on this and I hope to work on what you said. Thank you for your time.
-The_C0de_Master
 

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It's not a bad idea to use the new blocks, though in my opinion they're really.. ugly. Not relevant to your map at all, I blame whoever invented the blocks.

Regarding the map, remember to consider the gameplay as well as the aesthetics. I feel like the tower areas are not big enough, not symmetrical and therefore not pleasing to the eye.

I'd suggest possibly redesigning the path, so that the tower areas are balanced for both 3x3 and 5x5 towers to fit on.

Apart from this, the red and blue clay do not compliment the purple castles that you created. There's barely any block variation, making it look incredibly simple and monotone.

I'd suggest spicing up the design of the castle itself a little. Make it bigger, more interesting. Add depth. Depth is what you find in every successful map for pretty much everything.

Then add suttle red and blue accents around the castles to determine which side is who.

The chorus fruit... it's not a bad looking thing. It's just that there's too much of it in your map. Once again, making the map very boring and repetitive.

For this, I would suggest possibly adding a few improved end ships and mansions - bearing in mind not to use purple blocks only. Force the wow factor out of the map.

Adding to what @Undead said with the dragon, make a lair! Make it interesting. Possibly create your own custom end caves with dragon eggs and little baby dragons surrounding the map -learning to fly! Whatever you wish.

Placing around a bunch of chorus plants and calling it a 'forest' isn't very creative now, is it? Even if it was a forest, they don't stop at trees (or chorus plants in this case).

You can find creatures in forests, caves, interesting architecture created by nature itself. If you need inspiration with your theme, look at photographs and other references - this will surely boost your creativity :)

Overall, the concept isn't bad at all. But that's just the concept. It must be developed, made to look interesting - with depth, ideas and fun interactive builds.

Good luck!
 

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Um.. Yea... I feel like I shouldn't comment on this, but this is pretty much borderline terrible. You literally left giant spheres everywhere. Spammed the new chorus fruit down and made a purpur block path. This is like... just.. I'll leave it at that.
I love the map!
Its simple and that's good :)
GoodJob! +1
 

The_C0de_Master

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so its 3-1 right now for change. Let me make sure I have this right,
1. less chorus plant and it needs to be more creative
2. less red and blue on castles
3. make path more symmetrical
is this all?
 

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I agree with Undead, it needs some more creativity, more custom structures, and more details.. also, don't use spheres.
 

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This concept is amazing, but I think more "understanding" builders should take notes and build from it.
 

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Honestly if you feel you could fix it, try. Anything is possible... If I could show you some of the wonders I've somehow done I would... But it's "coming soon" :)
I'm going to be working on tutorials very soon so. it should help.
Can you make please a tutorial for floating islands
 
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