Dude just listen OK,most maps take 6 months if not 1 year.Its not bad it's better than my ps4 creations but the mid has nothing but OP GENS and the islands...The islands I wouldn't imagine took even 2 weeks to make.Sorry but it takes WAY more effort.I took 3 months to make a map that is never going to be on the forums.I guess I will never be good enough to make a map! I will just post the stuff that I have done and if you guys like it then tell me!
Never use real vines, make custom ones with leaves. Real vines will be annoying while playing and, it grows in game. also, that is too full with vines. Moderate the uso of decoration, and everything will be better.These are all the screen shots of what I have so far. also known as 71.74
to improve your islands you should follow this guide but make it a bit bigger and add some detail ontop.
step one: create an outline of how big your island should be.
step two: biuld down the distance you want to create the bottom.
step three: biuld up from the bottom to wards the platform to create an outline
step four: fill in the gaps in the island.
step five: add more block types to add detail and create a better look.
step six: recreate the top layer. i would recomend using clay for this as it is greener than grass.
now that you have your basic island you should add some things to it like a house or something. maybe hollow it out and make a room inside.