Look, I don't have anything against you, I just want to be honest and tell you what you're on. Sure, I can tell you it's a great map, it'll make you smile and be happy, but then you will just waste hours on finishing it and it won't be accepted, because it isn't good enough. Now, I told you what to improve, and I hope you appreciate my will to help you.
If you want to be a better builder, look for some building tips / tutorials, keep practising and I'm sure you'll be a great builder one day.
https://www.cubecraft.net/threads/the-5-minecraft-building-tips.98001/
Also, here are some good map submissions you can take a look at, so you can see what a good map looks like.
If you want to be a better builder, look for some building tips / tutorials, keep practising and I'm sure you'll be a great builder one day.
https://www.cubecraft.net/threads/the-5-minecraft-building-tips.98001/
Also, here are some good map submissions you can take a look at, so you can see what a good map looks like.
https://www.cubecraft.net/threads/snakes-a-solo-eggwars-map.109239/
https://www.cubecraft.net/threads/fallen-kingdom-eggwars-map.75216/
https://www.cubecraft.net/threads/skywars-jolteon-pokemon-fantasy-24-players-exclusive.102550/
https://www.cubecraft.net/threads/egg-wars-map-fallen.75973/
https://www.cubecraft.net/threads/map-teamskywars-original-creation-imperio.94549/
https://www.cubecraft.net/threads/fallen-kingdom-eggwars-map.75216/
https://www.cubecraft.net/threads/skywars-jolteon-pokemon-fantasy-24-players-exclusive.102550/
https://www.cubecraft.net/threads/egg-wars-map-fallen.75973/
https://www.cubecraft.net/threads/map-teamskywars-original-creation-imperio.94549/