Builds [Team Eggwars] Toxic

[ItzEnd3r]

Info
Map Creator(s): ItzEnd3r

Number Of Teams: 12

Number Of Players: 24

Menu Icon: Slime Ball

Generators:

Spoiler: Islands

Iron:
Lvl 1: 1
Lvl 2: 1
Gold:
Broken: 1
Lvl 1: 1
Diamond:
None

Spoiler: Submids

Iron:
None
Gold:
Lvl 2: 2
Diamond:
Broken: 1

Spoiler: Mid

Gold:
Lvl 2: 2
Diamond:
Lvl 2: 1
Lvl 3: 1
Emerald:
1

Emerald Items

Spoiler: Sword

Spoiler: Armor

Spoiler: Arrows

*NOTE* All prices and enchants can be changed / balanced

Images

Spoiler: Overview

Spoiler: Islands

Spoiler: Submids

Spoiler: Mid

Thanks @Nutuu @Luukk and @FuriousCorgi481 for the ideas :D

 

[ItzEnd3r]

cant get spoilers to work :/
Edit 1: fixed that now realized i didnt put a poll...
Edit 2: FIXED EVERYTHING (I hope)

 

[GiGaGekkies]

I really like the build style but maybe you can create a void at mid where the green thing atm is :)

 

[Ultimatei93]

Yayyy emeralds!

 

[Ultimatei93]

Info
Map Creator(s): ItzEnd3r

Number Of Teams: 12

Number Of Players: 24

Menu Icon: Slime Ball

Generators:

Spoiler: Islands

Iron:
Lvl 1: 1
Lvl 2: 1
Gold:
Broken: 1
Lvl 1: 1
Diamond:
None

Spoiler: Submids

Iron:
None
Gold:
Lvl 2: 2
Diamond:
Broken: 1

Spoiler: Mid

Gold:
Lvl 2: 2
Diamond:
Lvl 2: 1
Lvl 3: 1
Emerald:
1

Emerald Items
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Spoiler: Sword

View attachment 169232

Spoiler: Armor

View attachment 169231

Spoiler: Arrows

View attachment 169230

*NOTE* All prices and enchants can be changed / balanced

Images

Spoiler: Overview

View attachment 169222

Spoiler: Islands

View attachment 169223

Spoiler: Submids

View attachment 169224

View attachment 169225

Spoiler: Mid

View attachment 169226

View attachment 169227

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Thanks @Nutuu @Luukk and @FuriousCorgi481 for the ideas :D

Is this for java or bedrock?

 

[JDgamers]

Hi, I find it a really nice map, but personally I would make one change in the middle. I don’t really like vines, I would keep it there but make a stairs here ->

 

[Priley]

I personally think the map could use a bit of improvement:

Overall, camping will be a huge issue on the map. The slime spikes go through and below the islands. Players could and will undoubtedly camp on these. The middle island feels like a camper's paradise. The huge rocks(?) combined with the floating island are going to be encouraging camping a lot.
I think the underside of all islands is a bit messy, I'm assuming you used //replace for these. What I think could work is using either spots or layers of different types of blocks. (see spoiler)

Spoiler

Obviously not with the same blocks as used in this map. If you want to see more examples of this, make sure to visit some more maps!

Furthermore, the dirt and mycelium layer on the islands doesn't really melt with the rocky underside. Not really sure how to describe this one, so I've circled it on the image in the spoiler- again

Spoiler

Basically, you have your rocky underside and it looks like the dirt layer is just plopped on top of that.

On the spawn islands, the egg is in an annoying place. You could compare this to when the egg in Team EggWars map Treehouse was all the way up in the treehouse. Eventually, the egg was moved to be on the surface. Please do the same here!

On the middle island, none of the vines can be used to climb up. They have different behaviour than ladders. Maybe you already know this, but then the issue would be that players can't climb out of the pit in the middle, nor can they climb up the floating island.


So yeah, all in all, the map is okay. But for now, I've voted no.
but I am not a builder..!

 

[ItzEnd3r]

Is this for java or bedrock?

built in java but work for both

 

[ItzEnd3r]

On the middle island, none of the vines can be used to climb up. They have different behaviour than ladders. Maybe you already know this, but then the issue would be that players can't climb out of the pit in the middle, nor can they climb up the floating island.

tested this, and you can climb them, it just takes a little more effort, but i will work on the rest

 

[Vict0r]

Such a nice map! I love it!

 

[Rachelll]

I'm kinda stuck between voting for yes and no,

I really like the style of building in this map but camping would indeed be a huge issue in this map, the green spikes are placed everywhere which makes it easy to skybase and hit people off when trying to kill the enemy. Also the vines in Mid-Area are not really convenient. It's easy to get hit in the hole in Mid and it wouldn't be easy to get out of it. its better to make stairs going up made out of slabs. That way its easier to get out and chase the other enemy. Think of the gameplay while making a map.

Overall I do think u can improve some stuff about the map and further it looks really nice, if u fix those things that I said earlier in this feedback you probably will get accepted.

Kind Regards,

Rachel

 

[Roodrii]

I really like the map, I give it a yes, although obviously some more details can be put, but hopefully new maps will be taken for the different modalities. Nice job!

 

[FireExcalibur10]

Upload the photos with the default texturepack pls

 

[melkjong3n]

I like this world. But it looks a bit like another world that already exists anyway super well done compliments :)

 

[ItzEnd3r]

Upload the photos with the default texturepack pls

these are default

 

[ItzEnd3r]

Edit: Switched the location of the broken gold gen with the egg (so its more accessible), and fixed the dirt layer on mid.

 

[ItzEnd3r]

Ok, so some people mentioned issues with the middle area, I could either keep it how it is, or remove the glass and make it a void, what do you guys think

 

[Maaarijn]

I really like how it turned out! Good map submission!

 

[Maaarijn]

Ok, so some people mentioned issues with the middle area, I could either keep it how it is, or remove the glass and make it a void, what do you guys think

I think making some stairs there would be better. A void on the middle could be annoying

 

[Deleted member 421664]

Yes, I really love it to be honest, it is seems so cool