Builds "Time" - Eggwars Map Submission

[Younisco]

Aloha. I am here to show you a map I've been working on for about three weeks now, called Time. there is a total of 5 teams with 5 players each, 2 iron generators, 1 gold generator, and 1 diamond generator. The villager is marked by a purple wool -- Middle has 2 iron generators, 2 gold generators and 2 diamond generators. :]

Spoiler: Screenshots

Spoiler: Red Island

Spoiler: Pink Island

Spoiler: Yellow Island

Spoiler: Green Island

Spoiler: Purple Island

Spoiler: Middle

Spoiler: Middle (Inside)

Spoiler: Contents of Player Islands

Spoiler: Overview

Spoiler: Special Honours

@johnyestaloca , @xMegaCoolx , @telegamer , @iLoveYouu , and my two wonderful friends Akagodai and Quids. All of you are awesome and I couldn't have done it without y'all. <3

All feedback will be taken into consideration and be edited into a changelog in this post. :]
- Youn[/spoiler]

 

[ciwa]

Oh my life.. :eek:
Great job @YounB @johnyestaloca @xMegaCoolx @telegamer and @iLoveYouu! :)
Can you add a screenshot from the surface so we can have a look from how big the map is. :D

 

[telegamer]

No problem for the feedback ;)
Looks like a very nice map and I would play it :)

 

[Qin Shihuangdi]

This map looks amazing! The issue is that the map looks very camper friendly with the high rises and far distances between islands. My suggestion is to either A. Move the diamond generator higher / remove it from home islands or add a small connector path that goes a third of the way to mid.

 

[TeoVolcano]

Amazing map!!! 0_0
Would work a bit on terra, but I really like player islands!
Good job!!!

 

[skifby]

It's about tlme.
+1

 

[Younisco]

Would work a bit on terra, but I really like player islands!

I agree to be honest, but after about 10 attempts at terraforming, I just gave up. :P

This map looks amazing! The issue is that the map looks very camper friendly with the high rises and far distances between islands. My suggestion is to either A. Move the diamond generator higher / remove it from home islands or add a small connector path that goes a third of the way to mid.

I will probably add a series of gears towards the middle. However, I do understand that the distances are very far from middle, which is a big problem.

 

[RynezDev]

Looks really good! :)
Enough place to PvP! :D

Spoiler

You can always ask me to help on maps i ferry goet builder xd
Kappa

 

[Thaus]

What a map! It's awesome! +1328423789175471587530153915

 

[Younisco]

Added a general overview. @Alex_de_Grote , @Max111D. , @HuracanFTW :]

 

[Pandaa]

The terrain needs some work, it looks a bit dull. Especially the middle island.

As you can see here. There is an open space there which looks kind of dull. Don't overdo it. Maybe add some type of floor pattern, or something that looks timewise good.

Also, on the trees I noticed you didn't use //replace log log:12 this will change all the logs to six-sided logs and will not have that ugly look.

I love the rooves of the center clockhouse it looks amazing, however underneath it, it could use some depth, maybe bring it out by one to give it that little pinch of sparkling dust which will make it stand out more.

I love the idea of the surrounding islands, well done on that! However on the front of the island, it looks a bit plain. If I were you, I would raise the the bit of a clock one up by each new hour. If you understand what I mean, it would be better gameplaywise (imo) and lookwise if thats even a word.

The underneath of the island looks excellent and very well-done, however IMO the cyan stained clay looks a bit out of place. Maybe add something that blends in more and don't use //replace . Use the worldedit brush and make some cool pattern on it.

Spoiler: Side Note

I also noticed that inside that time measuring thingy (don't know the english word) the dust dropping could be a bit wider and more *unnatural*. However, the rest looks great and this is a very original idea.

NOTE: This is just my opinion. If you feel like something I said isn't right, you don't need to change it :p

 

[hgbf]

It's a good map, but I feel like the islands are a little... boring. I don't think it looks that good from the players angle.Try adding a little more to the islands ;)

P.S. Try replacing the logs with logs with log:12 ;)

 

[Younisco]

As you can see here. There is an open space there which looks kind of dull. Don't overdo it. Maybe add some type of floor pattern, or something that looks timewise good.

I will try to add some more variation in the floor definitely! Thanks. :]

Also, on the trees I noticed you didn't use //replace log log:12 this will change all the logs to six-sided logs and will not have that ugly look.

Oh lord, I forgot to do that. Thanks. xD

I love the rooves of the center clockhouse it looks amazing, however underneath it, it could use some depth, maybe bring it out by one to give it that little pinch of sparkling dust which will make it stand out more.

Don't really understand you mean by that.. Could you explain a little more?

I love the idea of the surrounding islands, well done on that! However on the front of the island, it looks a bit plain. If I were you, I would raise the the bit of a clock one up by each new hour. If you understand what I mean, it would be better gameplaywise (imo) and lookwise if thats even a word.

I get you, will definitely see how it looks.

The underneath of the island looks excellent and very well-done, however IMO the cyan stained clay looks a bit out of place. Maybe add something that blends in more and don't use //replace . Use the worldedit brush and make some cool pattern on it.

I'll definitely try. (Seeing a trend? xD)

 

[Ping Ether]

Nah this is too good for CCG
(Jkjk pls desbanos )

 

[Zombiepower]

Nice map guys well done

 

[Pandaa]

Don't really understand you mean by that.. Could you explain a little more?

Basically adding indents to the clocktowers etc, it could also go out by one, but it would just look better,
and ye definately a trend :P

Anywho ye so that's me and my english (you can tell I come from France c:)

 

[mc_minecraft_procube]

Aloha. I am here to show you a map I've been working on for about three weeks now, called Time. there is a total of 5 teams with 5 players each, 2 iron generators, 1 gold generator, and 1 diamond generator. The villager is marked by a purple wool -- Middle has 2 iron generators, 2 gold generators and 2 diamond generators. :]

Spoiler: Screenshots

Spoiler: Red Island

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Spoiler: Pink Island

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Spoiler: Yellow Island

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Spoiler: Green Island

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Spoiler: Purple Island

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Spoiler: Middle

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Spoiler: Middle (Inside)

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Spoiler: Contents of Player Islands

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Spoiler: Overview

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Spoiler: Special Honours

@johnyestaloca , @xMegaCoolx , @telegamer , @iLoveYouu , and my two wonderful friends Akagodai and Quids. All of you are awesome and I couldn't have done it without y'all. <3

All feedback will be taken into consideration and be edited into a changelog in this post. :]
- Youn[/spoiler]

It's the best

 

[Gainfullterror]

Spoiler: My initial thought

But the fact that there are 5 islands, makes it a bit unbalanced. A strategic pick would be:
Red or pink. For rushing purposes
Green for being isolated,so either you could: bridge to mid in peace, or you can automatically notice rushers since they pretty much come head on.

 

[Nikboo]

I like the map but the terraforming can be worked on ;).

 

[Thomaser]

Nice work :)
Maybe the CC Builders should here and there edit some things, and it can be implemented in the game ;)